WOW! All these talanted people on here! Great poem! Keep writting!

Ah, so beautiful... I wish I had known this before...
:pinkbow:

I do use the name Harumi Sumiko for most of my writing, so maybe I could share parts of it with you.

Here's another:

How Wrong We All Were

はるみ すみこ

You said that you liked him
As a friend
You thought he wouldn't leave you
He would stay forever
You said you would die for him
You thought he wouldn't mind
You knew no friendship remains untested
You thought it would stay strong
You found a way into his life
You thought he didn't care
How wrong you were.
How wrong we all were.

I wish you didn't leave me
I wish I didn't hurt so badly
I wish it could have ended long ago
When it wasn't so strong.
And I know there is no use wishing
But I do not care
For I would rather be without
Any more pain
That penetrates my heart.

It's beautiful. In my many years and many losses of love, I can understand that pain. We can make the pain a bridge we can cross so we can meet the true right person for us. When we become stronger inside we will become ready to meet that person. So ride out the storm, a new day will dawn!

You must be the most inspiring person I know...

As I say, you don't have to be torn apart to write a song. I hope I can be more uplifting later in my life.

It's great. keep posting more!!

Yes your right, life has it's ups and downs like a roller coaster! lol!
Remember the good times helps us when we are down. Inspiring, I'm just older, I guess lived life and I'm still learning it's lessons!:)

life is a roller coaster...currently all the songs/poems i wrote were because people are dumb when it comes to the fact that you care for them...but currently i guess in a weird way i couldnt be happier that im alone... its weird but i dont know how to explain it ...
my sister just went through like two boyfriends in a span of two days but i'm so glad im alone because i dont have to go through that every day.

Here is a poem my friend wrote when she just found out she had diabetes...

Hurting Me

You hurt me with your silence,
You hurt me with your side glance,
You hurt me in every way
And all I have to say,
Don't hurt me again!

I'm sorry that I make you sad,
Sorry that I get so mad,
Sorry that we feel so bad,
And that we lost the chance we had.
Don't hurt me again!

I'm just a girl,
Caught up in my own world,
And you ran away from that place,
You can't stand to look at my face.
You hurt me again.

Again we both shed tears,
Again we've lost more years,
Again Death stands in between us,
Again I've made a fuss,
Again we have lost.
We're hurt again.

You hurt me,
I hurt you.
We hurt together,
We hurt apart.
The hurting doesnt stop.
Make it stop.
Stop...
Stop...
Stop hurting me!
You're hurting me!

Thats powerful- your friend has a hard road ahead.

Sorry to remove the apostrophes. Anyway, if you're having a hard day, you can say you're "following the emotional stock market." I say that sometimes.
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Yeah, we neet to buy to stock that's steady and reliable!:)

Sorry, I didn't want to share this, after all.

Hey! We have almost more views than the forum rules! Read the rules, JF members!:pinkcry:

Thank you:vsign:

Pine Knot, Kentuky

The buding flowers begin to open their flowers to the sky
My cats running along in the sun playfully teasing one another
Kittens arriving in the world
Everyone coming out of their homes to greet the warm air
The horse taking their morning runs
The cows and their kids having a game of tag
The birds singing a song while the trees dance in the wind
This is Pine Knot
The place where not much goes on
Except for the music of spring.

Brand new poem that I wrote about my home in the spring time. I hope you all like it. I might edited it if I feel I need to add more to it.

thats gooddd :]
id write about ohio
but it sucks here :P

listen up
 

hey not to be mean but you do no that someone could steal your songs or poetry and make it there own think about it....... some one on MTV or something singing something YOU wrote and making millions off it that would really suck becuase you wouldnt get any thing u no.

Hmm... good point. However, I will not care for the moment. Sorry.

I don't worry about that either- I have proof that they are mine that's good enough for me.

We have seven pages now? Wow; what an accomplishment, on a thread created by me!

See? Amazing writting everyone!!

that is awesome, kajitsu, i really liked that poem. way 2 go!:cool: i think i should try writing my own song... ;)

They're not all depressing; just most of them. I'll try to find another that is more light in spirit.

We officially have more views than the forum rules thread does. How odd.

There's a rules thread?:D

Go back one page; it's a sticky.

I was being funny:rolleyes:

May i try?

I sing sound of brittle melody
When you lay there i couldnt hear your heart beat
Did you leave me?

Why...?

I hold hand that turns so cold
I want to hear your voice once again
It’s ok to sing sad song with me
As long i can still feel your breath in my face.

But it just a dream, and you know that........
Cause you’re a step away from the place you stand now
And i couldnt hold you for not leaving

My last song, i would sing a Goodbye.......

Goodbye...

I like it!!!
Here's a short one:

CLOSE THE DOOR
_______________



Close the door
turn out the light
No one is
here anymore.
Smile and wave
say I had a good time
say goodbye
close the door
turn out the light- Mitcheru Lee

Urk - awkward moment

Sorry.

S'OK!:ywave:

this is a song i wrote. i hope youu all like it!
its called.....

Your not,
the only one,
who stares out that window,
your not the only one.
Who thinks that they should go,
go away forever.....
Don’t!
Take your life,
its not that bad,
just open up your eyes!
Don’t!
Forget those things,
that were so dear to you,
that’s what,
you should be living for,
a happy ending......
is all your waiting for.

Don’t run and hide,
Behind that the smile that’s always on your face,
You’re hurting yourself,
I’m afraid for you,
You’re a coward,
Or you wouldn’t have told me,
That everything is going well.


I’m here to save you,
And get you out of that dark hole,
I’m here and I won’t leave you.
Don’t throw away what you always stood up for.
Ill fix your crown you once wore so proudly,
And ill place it on your head.
Those wings that you have will be white once again.

Im hear to save you,
Your not the only one,
Who stares out that window.
And wish that wernt here,
Ill never lie to you,
Ill always be near.
Don’t take your life away,
Its not that bad,
All you have to realize this,
Is open up your eyes…..


Ur not the only one,
Ill save u from ur past,
Things like time are never meant to last.
Ur going down a dark path,
Full of misery and despair,
I cant follow,
I wont go down there.
But if I have to,
Just to bring you back,
Then ill wander that road,
Until I prove to you wats meant to last.

U complain about so much,
U cant look anyone in the eye,
Yet for some reason I can tell u don’t want to die.
U just just think that’s wat everyone wants,
Its not,
So put down the knife,
Turn and go down the other road,
The one where u were so scared to go.
Ill be waiting at the beginning,
Ill be waiting to tell you im proud of you,
So meet me there,
Ill be waiting,
I promise,
So even you can see,
How special you are to me.

He lives in a boring community.
Waiting for time to fly.
Nothing more to say about.
His very boring life.
He's home schooled and only 13.
What's that? He's me!


^_^ I know it's a little boring XD

Very powerful and uplifting!

Yes. I agree.

thank you! everyone else said it was very good yet very dark.....but thanx!!!!^_^