I'm using that in something I'm writing. :)

Keep this where everyone can see it! Who's with me?

I am!! let's keep this going!!

+1 bump from 果実さん!

Standing on the Brink

Standing on the brink
waiting for something.
The world seems more lost
than I,
and it's waiting to explode
I see people all around
ready to jump out of
the skin they're in.
If one thing more goes wrong,
not thinkin it will take long.
For all we know
believe in
trust in,
happiness in possesions
no more.
All to be wiped away.
Standing on the brink.
Mitcheru~08

This is literally 'hot off the press.'

In Your Memory

I scream your name
No, please don't leave
I need you around
Can you not see?
I yell your name
Come back, I say
Must this be how
It all ends here?
I call your name
Do you hear it now?
What have I done
To make it so?
I speak your name
Do you understand?
I fear you may
Never come back
I whisper your name
Why can't you stay?
I fall to the ground
You walk away.

I can relate to that! Great words. Mine was too heavy.

Do you remember to whom you are saying that? I think it was fine.

Thank you :)

I made the last four lines into a signature. How do you like it?

i wrote one... its pretty bad, but maybe you guys will like it. its a kinda abstract collection of my thoughts after going to Sakura-Con 2008...

Crazy randomness.
Crossdress and cosplay.
Merch. for sale!
Glomped by fangirls...
Why am I broke? T-T
Para Para Deathnote?!
Phail at DDR...
Tired. Feet sore. Pass out on floor.
AWESOME.

ok... i was just reading your guys' poems. they OWN. now i feel inadequate. T__T

=commence posting of poem that is actually slightly good=

i wrote this one after military recruiters came to my school. it's untitled... hope you like it!

Satan's army is recruiting,
come and join the fun.
Kill Maim Bomb Destroy,
all it costs is one.
A single simple soul,
then the deed is done.
You belong to me,
for eternity.

It reminds me of my mall shopping poem. I'll see what I can remember.

Heavy doors and clothing stores
Craziness comes forth, it pours
Into a mind that isn't yours

Advertisements left and right
Pulling in with all their might
Not seeing reasons why you fight

That's all I can remember right now. I guess I'm not the typical girl :P

Looks great! Very creative!:vsign:

kajitsu, yours is really good!!!

(which makes me depressed because i am poem-tarded. >___<)

If you want, I can make another signature of it. I have Photoshop Elements now and it's mostly working.

Thank you:D

Photoshops great!! I use it at work, mostly on pictures though.

Well I like poetry and I composed this after a friend had a falling out with their Fiance


Love can be sweet, and love can be kind love can be true if that's what you find. Loves have a tendency to be conductive, and the benefits can be quite seductive. But remember my friend above all, Love is destructive.


A litte macabe at the end but it gives you a grasp on the highs and lows.

It's true love can be!

The world spins
faster and faster.
Can't catch up.
Buy it now,
but you pay in the end.
You never gain,
keep falling behind.
Out of control,
it spins.
Faster and faster.
Mitcheru~

Something I came up with a few wekks ago

You think I'm strong?
Well guess what...you're wrong.
I'm just as weak as when I was small,
but that's kept inside.
I don't know how long.
Different phases,
same old me...
forgiving as ever,
can't you see?
The act ends here,
with this last line.
For I need you
But you don't need me

k here are a couple of mine

Dream Forever
Life is but a dream, it isn't as real as you want it to be. But sometimes dreams are all we really have left.

Decay
Drifting, violent, sobbing screams.
Erie laughterm haunting dreams.
Creeping fears, falling tears.
Arriving in the darkness after such sudden light, then in
Yelling, fury the last of my hope starts to decay...


Insanity
Instintly my life is over locked in this room.
Nothing seems real as the
Sorrow comes to play...
Again. I thought it was gone.
No, I guess it never was.
I was mistaken
To think that
Your love could ease me insanity.

Those are great!!

Another great poem!!

Scarlet Blood

I'm dying inside, and nobody cares.
Can't somebody come save me?
Deep scarlet drops,
fall to the floor,
I'm dying inside.
Nobody sees the tears I cry,
cause I always hide,
before they see my eyes.
I want to live, but don't know how.
So for now,
I relish the pain,
this sharp blade brings,
watching the dark scarlet drops,
drip to the floor.
I'm dying inside,
you will never know.
Know I lay,
dead on the floor.
I gave in to the pain,
cut to deep.
I made the mistake,
all those other teens made.
Did you not believe me,
When I said goodbye?
I will never see tomorrow,
as my world goes black.
Scarlet blood around me,
as I say my last goodbye.

Heres a funny one-

On top of a mountain
All covered in trees
that lost all it's people
when attacked by a chimpanzee

They ran down the mountain
and straight through the park
and reach the hotel
just right before dark

Some people got rooms
some slept in the lounge
some actually slept
and others stayed up singing campfire songs

Oh they sang so loud
they woke up the crowd
and early next morning
they got kicked out

Tey were forced back to the mountain
attacked by the chimpanzee
so let's just say for now
they are hiding in the trees

so next time you climb a mountain
attacked by a chimpanzee
just run to the hotel
but don't you dare sing.

Wow, that was so not depressing! What a change of the aura around this thread.

haha thanks

Too many and I want to show them all >.< Here's a few short ones to start:

None of them have titles:

A break from the rest
It sparkles and shines
Surface unbroken
The moon in its eyes
Like cool, molten glass
It bends to her hand
Testing the waters
Alone in the sand
A dip and it's over
The ripples recede
Swallowed her whole
Alone in the reeds.

~♥ ~♥

A single diamond in a sea of stone
A bittersweet beauty
Solitary, alone
Buried deep
Deep inside
Its shimmering splendor
Behind closed eyes
As it rolled down her cheek
Screaming truth with such grace
She looked out at the world
A smile on her face.

~♥ ~♥

Like a wave hits the shore
She broke down on the floor
Like the incoming tide
Tears flooded her eyes
Out flowed the crimson
The tears from her heart
Like the letter he wrote
It has been torn apart
She reached for the knife
Cold steel pressing down
The red kiss of life
It freed her, let her drown.

~♥ ~♥

That's it for now... Though I have at least one more I'd like to post, I'll post it later :D

Please tell me what you think ^.^

Mm.. here's that other one right now actually.

I attached it because it would be an annoyingly long post.

It's a poem that I wrote for lit a while ago... not my usual style but I personally love the topic ^.^

Called "Smile"

Tsukimoon, I like your writing. I skipped the post with "Smiles" because that title just sounded like something I didn't care to read. But after reading the short three, I decided it might be worth reading. All four are good.

Thanks :D I'm glad you decided to read the fourth one too.

I dare you to send this to someone on Valentine's day:

Roses are red, violets are blue-
wait - if they're blue, why are they called violets?

Sorry to ruin the more serious mood, but I like sharing that one.