Thanks for the critque and thank you so, so, so, so much for giving me hoenst critque! I honestly hate it when people baby me and don't just tell me straight up what they think.

(*Or if you have people who are too lazy to tell you what to critque. I have people like that in my classes. They do that when we have a big writing assignment. *sigh*)

See, the reason I don't like posting on those sites made just for writing is because in the past, people have just insulted me instead of giving me helpful tips on improving my reading. Not only did that hurt my but it made me think that I could never get better at writing. What that person said to be was rude and unfair because anyone can get better if they try.

Yep. Practice makes perfect as they say. LOL Keep at it. ^.^

No worries, comes with the job.

I'd like to join this group as well if that's okay. It would be nice to get a critique on some of my work.

Sure thing. Why don't you post some of your work. I'd be happy to read it. ^.^

I've been a writer for most of my life :] sign me up!

I'm glad someone started a thread like this.