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RKitagawa 06-07-2009 10:59 PM

Did this one today. Quick Zbrush sculpt of some... monster/alien/thing.
done in about 2 hours.



and here is a turnaround, so you can see the whole thing.


RKitagawa 06-11-2009 12:59 AM

made a new head sculpt today. The base mesh wasn't done by me though.
I recorded the whole process. hope you like it!


HikariTenrai 06-14-2009 01:45 PM

I have quite a lot of art works and have no idea which one i should share >.<'
I hope it's okay for me to share just the entire gallery lol.
7oneders's deviantART gallery
(btw, im new here ^.^')

l00pdel00p 06-15-2009 12:02 PM

all the artwork on this trhead is so impressive o.0
im never happy with my own drawings but these to in particular im not sure about any help would be muchly appreciated :3
sorry i dont have a scanner ¬.¬

uruha from gazette pencil sketch


this one isnt shaded or colloured yet but i want to get the base image right first


thankyou again ^^

RKitagawa 06-15-2009 02:13 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by l00pdel00p (Post 734294)
all the artwork on this trhead is so impressive o.0
im never happy with my own drawings but these to in particular im not sure about any help would be muchly appreciated :3
sorry i dont have a scanner ¬.¬

thankyou again ^^

WOW, did you actually draw that first one? I honestly thought it was a photo at first. You should be very proud of your drawings l00pdel00p.
As for any critique, I'd say the design of that creature's face seems a little generic. I would change that.

But damn. Be proud of your work! It's very good. :ywave:

EDIT: just noticed the fingers one the creature's left hand are a little out of proportion, compared to his other hand.

RKitagawa 06-15-2009 03:14 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by HikariTenrai (Post 734031)
I have quite a lot of art works and have no idea which one i should share >.<'
I hope it's okay for me to share just the entire gallery lol.
7oneders's deviantART gallery
(btw, im new here ^.^')

hey HikariTenrai. Welcome to JF!
since this is more of an Art Help thread, it would be nice if you could select 1 or 2 specific drawings/photos that you'd like to have critiqued. Without that all I can say is that overall you have some pretty crazy stuff. Looks very... drug induced lol. It's a cool style you got, and you are very good with your colors.

But we can't give you any specific tips without a specific painting/drawing/photo to look at.

RKitagawa 06-16-2009 01:53 AM

Quick sketch done today for fun.

warning huuuuuuuge file size!

I don't do too many action poses, so I wanted to try that, also experimenting with action/speed lines and stuff.

critiques would be nice! ;)



CLICK FOR FULL SIZE

Kanji_The_Wanderer 06-16-2009 02:06 AM

Nice, very nice. I see no qualms with the impaled figure, you did a very good job there.

The character on the left looks a bit off, it may be just me, his throwing arm seems a bit too long, though you see that a lot in many styles, overly long arms, so I don't know if that's what you were aiming at. There is something about his right leg. I know in this piece it's his center of balance, but something about it is throwing me off.

The details are so minor though, it doesn't affect the grandness at all.

Also it be great if you could bring the photo down to a 700 pixel width, since it's stretching the page.

RKitagawa 06-16-2009 02:24 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kanji_The_Wanderer (Post 734492)
Nice, very nice. I see no qualms with the impaled figure, you did a very good job there.

The character on the left looks a bit off, it may be just me, his throwing arm seems a bit too long, though you see that a lot in many styles, overly long arms, so I don't know if that's what you were aiming at. There is something about his right leg. I know in this piece it's his center of balance, but something about it is throwing me off.

The details are so minor though, it doesn't affect the grandness at all.

Also it be great if you could bring the photo down to a 700 pixel width, since it's stretching the page.

thanks for the comments man, ur right about his arm being too long. It wasn't done on purpose lol. thanks for pointing it out.
about his leg, i think it's his knee, that's screwing it up. It's pointing in a different direction than his shoe. which i just noticed now.

thanks a lot man, Wouldn't have noticed those problems if you hadn't pointed them out for me. :)

Kanji_The_Wanderer 06-16-2009 02:36 AM

No problem, glad I could be of service then.
By the way, your 3D stuff is top notch. Great.


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