RKitagawa, that is some work you did. They are great.

Maybe you can help me with some of my work?
http://www.japanforum.com/forum/memb...hes-great.html

@Miyavikuun
Here it is! Hope it helps. I tried a few new things for this video to make it easier to read and understand.


Also, I only did one picture because there are other people waiting for critiques. If you'd like me to do another one feel free to ask.

EDIT: song is from the evangelion 2.0 soundtrack (not sure of the name though, sorry)

@kufunofu You're welcome :)
haha, I thought it was weird for a muffin to have icing. My bad.

Keep on practicing!

@Pexster, thanks pex. I'd be glad to do a critique or two. any particular picture u want me to do first?

Here's some random pictures taken by me. Excuse the piss poor camera phone quality.

Hey Strawberryshinya!
Here it is, finally. Uhm, I just wanted to say first that The fixes I made were very small tweaks really. You did a really good job, and I had a tough time finding any actual "errors"

Also, the thing about the heads being too big compared to the body is arguably just style. I know that bigger heads are actually quite common in anime, but for this critique I just wanted to do more anatomically realistic proportions.



Biggest problem really was that the poses were too stiff, and I made really minor tweaks to make them look more relaxed I guess.

Hope it helps, and good work! :ywave:

Here's a link to the youtube page, in case you need it to download: Paintover Video

omg!! thank you. i just finished watching it. it was almost scary xD!!
i think ill need u to do that for my entire doujin! lol
thankyou soo much
i see what u mean with it all.
ur awesome!!

lol, you're very welcome.
Let me know any time if you want me to do another one. I'd be happy to help.

I really like the blue one.
But I can't critique it beyond saying that you need a better camera lol. I'm no photographer.

PEXSTER!!!

Just finished uploading it now. Did both of those portraits cause they were nice and simple.


Thank you for drawing in this style, lol. I'm sooo sick of drawing anime.
So, I had a lot of fun doing this one, and spent some extra time to draw more carefully.

Let me know if you have any questions.

Oh, and everything about pushing the expressions more is of course just my personal opinion. Many of my favorite portraits have really vague/blank expressions, so it's definitely not a problem or anything. It is important to know how to push those expressions though.