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whats the saying-- its better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all.

Deep... You have a real talent. Its better than some of the things I read at Oxford :D

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Originally Posted by Eiri02 (Post 826233)

I still dream about one love
affair in particular
The scent of her hair and
how my words use to tickle her
Call it Nostalgia or whatever you
will
Her laughter was nourishment
more so than any meal
I thought it was real more
unbreakable than any deal

...and shit...

I still dream about her
she was gorgeous all natural
or with her face powdered
Her soul was tailor made
it went perfect with her eyes
I thought I had found my heart
she was pain in disguise

...I guess...

The mind overrides LOVE
When you fall for its lies

By: Eric M.

i realy enjoy your poem :) do you have more maybe?

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Originally Posted by Eiri02 (Post 826255)

Yes LOL...but once one is able to write these things out for others to read and relate to they can begin to recover from these everday tragedies

I believe it is in the writing that some Healing can happen.

It is like therapy. Some of our greatest poems are about Love, rejection, soul.