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To true for words of few
Why dont we ever see
tht things can never be the same way they were before How do you know where to go to always find me lost in the clouds I dont dare look down unless Im holding onto you everything is turning quier starts out as a darker blue taking on a darker hue someday maby we can stay as two:rheart: |
Um… wow that's good. All the poems in this topic are amazing! I read through every one of them. Great stuff Yuri... Thanks for posting mine too....
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Well, this is for Kakashi.......
Like white horses of the sea, Smothered under waves that die Reminiscent of the evening sky But, how vast can something be! Like all the feelings you stole from me A sun defeated by your shrine, Crawling behind horizon's line The night that dwindles still not dark, The moon's beauty just a mark All power ceased, all sorrow faint, All is nothing, your beauty quaint. Your memory wrapped within my smile, Like we're embracing for a while And in the sunset heaven lies, All in my arms in pretty disguise These memories treasure like some jewel, Not hard to love you, not some fool. Still grasping passion, won't let go This love I cherish is all I know. |
Aw....I have to agree with Rikku...it is absolutely darling! *cries because of it's beauty*
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its a great poem hisu, i hope you didnt mind that I posted the one you wrote for me, I couldnt hold back on it, I love it to much!
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*blushes*...
Thank you all! :o :rheart: *huggles* and extra love to Kakashi! Thanks for saying you like the other one too Yuri-chan! *huggles* |
yeah...your welcome hisuwashi-san
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Yuri... you didn't reply to my PM...? oh well I'm off now, bye folks.
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oh, srry, I didnt have time to answer it, but I will asap!
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Love isnt always Blue
Here is a love poem, I dont think its that great, but I'll put it up anyway:
Sitting out in the cold White and blue is what im told I look like out here in the old world Wanting a hand Someone to care and love much more than I have been told seeing you here then seeing you there I cry out in pain For my heart yearns for love Covering up in a deep blue scarf I join you walking in the park Turning pink My skin turns to its normal hue And I can be found now Kissing under the bright white clouds With you |
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. . . . . . . . . . I went to tie my shoes!!!! ROFLMAO!!!! When she saw that, she smashed my head into the wooden post on the seat...it hurt, alot (the pain ASTOUNDED me), and then I asked her the way I planned on doin' it. WHY DO YOU GUYS WANT ALL THAT ROMANTIC SHIIIT!?!?!?! |
because it makes us feel special and the one you really care for
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my life shall dim the sun my life will skim such red is the way of the light so dark but yet so bright my dear my love my time will pass the light says it all and about how my life is dumb so selfish and so simple so crazy and unbelieveing my life is so dull i cry out for you my pain is uncontrolling so hard is it to love but though your love is true i cant help but see it right through even though you love me i still hurt inside depressed and sad and lonly i cant stop the raging hate in me i rest my head down slowly slowly i see it blurr slowly the wrld will turn but i wont see the day it stops because ill be gone by then |
You're poems are really good.
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aw, thanx..took me 10 min. to think of the one i just posted
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oh yes, please
your poems are so wonderful, i lov them |
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My friend wrote this one the first time he heard about the Holocaust. It's almost poetry, but sounds more like a quote from the bible...
"why is it that you cry?" the man asked himself. "Why is it?" he says. As all around him the flames jumped, the children burned, the women cryed and the men were starved to the point of death "Why is it that you cry?" As all around him the world turned to ashes, each and every family was thrown down down, out of gods reach, left no more hope than they could ever bare to keep "Why is it that you cry?" As all around him the bodies slept without graves, the children cried out for their mothers who would never hold them again, where the only reply was a bludgen to the face from another, hopeless, starved child. "Why is it that you cry?" The man asked himself. "That isn't the question," the man replied. "The question is, why is it they did not?" |
some days we cry
some days we will die many times we will shed a tear maybe we will cry out in anger my mind will wander i shall ponder of all my life why is it im sad is it for my life is bad so simple and hard i cry out in hurt and i cry ou in anger but i dont cry out tears anymore my blood is to shed as my life is to wonder what it shall be i bend to my knees so suffer my life my friends and family have nothing to see my anger and pain are inside me so now i say goodbye my life now shall die i wave to you as my life is through boodbye my love goodbye |
k, its been a while since i have posted any poems, and i know alt of people like them.
for now i have 2 poems to post: Bright Smile Big bright smile, so small and alone the sun the moon the stars have shown eyes that cry, my tears are dry bones on edge big bright light as bright as this fire fight big bright smile wont you stay for a while gazing to the moon, a moon with a smile lasting for a time, only for a time rest down your head, on a pillow of stars sleep with confort, in the confort of night eyes that smile happy and true please never lie because i love you (end) Rain Poem between sun set and twilight there is magic in all night falls silently explosion of colour in the sky secret deepinng shades of gray the rhythem of rain rumbles and whispers falling far enough to touch your skin its dark oh so dark the rain comes and goes but we sleep the ground shakes and sky splits but we sleep only thunder, only thunder we wake to gray skys leting it rain, let it rain icy sweetness, our skin wll dry tonights full moon with gray skys letting it rain, rain on us but we sleep intermittenly (end) |
WOW! O_O... O_O... O_O... *silence* *faints*
Yurichan I don't know how you do it every time. Awesome poems. I really liked the smile poem. It had such wonderful visual appeal with the sun and the moon both in it! Great goin! :vsign: The rain poem seemed to end a little abruptly. It certainly gave a sense of rain with the description of thunder and repetitions of the word "rain", but the ending went with sleep... Was there more to it? :confused: or did that signify the rain and thunder of bad dreams causing intermittent sleep? If so, that's really a deep thought! I'm very amazed O_O |
haha, the way the rain poem ended was the way it was to end. kinda like how the rain and thuder can be so calming, making one feel sleepy and sleep longer.....like a forever sleep...ur the first to catch a glimps at what i ment with the ending of it...good work!
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Love poems... I'm a romantic at heart :o
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my Bright Smile was a kinda love poem...hehe
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Where's the next one?! <_< .. >_> .. ?_?.. :D
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haha
heres 2 more i typed up, ill type up the other few tomorrow Leap of Faith: standing on the pier walking hand-in-hand looking over at you a background of golden sand kisses warm and soft saying i love you letting go of your hand i stand alone to watch the view you walk up behind me wrap your arms around my waist i shift the confort over my heart filled with distast i walk away from you i take a leap of faith just a gentle splash into a deep blue wave hearing your voice call to me come to take me home my mind says yes my heart says no lungs burn and heart pounds but i let it sink my life is over now im dead standing there you wimper trying to remeber her name you kissd that girl the night before now you wish you told that girl how all of it was wrong because now the one you loved before is now forever gone (end) Sickly Drip: a sickly drip steady and slick the only sound you hear is drip...drip...drip river of red seeping into my bed all you see is it goin drip...drip...drip your eyes close and your heart beats fast mind boggled and pain that will forever last dropping to your knees tears of pain go drip...drip...drip my dear i know i hurt you so my pain was worse so i let the moment go drip...drip...drip (end) so whatcha think? |
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Wonderful imagery in the sickly drip poem :rolleyes:. I wasn't a big fan of the uneven syllable meter but the last four lines were really really good! Very evoking poem. Leap of faith was an interesting read. It starts out with rhyme schemes and even a palpable meter but lets go of those rhymes in between. As a deep thinker and an optimist and more significantly as a big fan of your poetry, I tend to think of that as a pointed effort to show that as the main character made a leap of faith away from their old love so did the poem by moving away from rhyme scheme. It's a very interesting concept :rolleyes: Awesome as always Yuri-chan! Can't wait for more! ^_^ *hugs* |
haha i need to get better for you, you think to much about it and tend to get the right concept hahaha
i am very glad you like my poems, i will type up more tonight for you and post them here |
Your Lies
here is another poem i wrote today:
Your lies Can’t you hear? The wind is calling Can’t you see? My heart is longing Why cant you Let you fingers go crawling Against my skin Walking blindly down the hall I hear sounds Echo all around My fingers go raw against these walls I cry my tears when you aren’t around Six feet under below the ground I hear nothing not one sound Seeking out what cant be found My eyes sown shut with your lies Your looks deceive me You deceive my eyes Deceive me still My heart full of lies Oh how I wish to see blue skies To still be burdened I should rather die Under the moon The sun The sky Maybe one day I shall see through your lies (end) |
Hey Yuri you going to be on messanger?
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heres some i wrote... im a poem writer, too.
Ey, you over there, say you wanna fight? you wanna do dis with guns or bare hands? "nah, lets settle dis on da streets"... you wont understand that poem unless i told u i was a streetracer, which i am. hey babe, your car look aight. hey babe, you wana go race tonight? you know you want it, you know you cant resist. so lets get this started, the winner gets is all... (all rights resevred; EVEN THO THAT STATEMENT IS USLESS) PLEASE DONT STEAL MY POEMS! i hate poem theives. |
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