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it's a really nice poem^^
i'm proud on you my bro' xDD
*huggles*

what did upset you?

sure dear^^
it's no problem
as long as you're okay now?

goodie^^
i'm not worried about you anymore
*pats draken's head*

i have no idea.. i haven't seen her the whole day
yesterday she got a bad grade so maybe she wasn't alowed to use the computer today ><
but i really don't know

okay you talented man xD
i'll check it out

be warned this is very sad and may scare

Very full of feeling...i do like it....specially how you designed it as a note.....lovely....depressing, but lovely...

I don't fear death...but i do fear how i will die...lol

thats so pretty!!!!! I love it! OH! I love it alot!

Yeah...her and Hisu are so lovely together, but so far away...i really hope they get to meet each other in real life...

awww I love it!!! It's sooo pretty!!

Quote:

Originally Posted by drakenjecht (Post 145301)

Distance

you remember the days we spent
at our computer screens
typing in words to each other
they lonely years we spent away from one another
we may not have been together but we was happy

those were the days when we first declared our love
our love has lasted so long,
so many years have passed since then,
we are now finally together

how we dreamed of this day
for so long
for so long we have wanted to kiss
to hugg, to hear each other
say i love you to one another

now your here please don't leave
we are happy now and we allways will be
my love thanks for sticking with me for so long.
you remember the days we spent
at our computer screens
typing in words to each other
they lonely years we spent away from one another
we may not have been together but we was happy

those were the days when we first declared our love
our love has lasted so long,
so many years have passed since then,
we are now finally together

how we dreamed of this day
for so long
for so long we have wanted to kiss
to hugg, to hear each other
say i love you to one another

now your here please don't leave
we are happy now and we allways will be
my love thanks for sticking with me for so long.

i love that one...lolz:D its kewlies

OUR LOVE WILL LAST

our love will last
wait and see
how much
we can be
together forever
our hearts on fire
its our desire
to see our love grow
and never tire
to se it swim
to see it drown
i would rather die
before it would come down
to see your face
to see you smile
it is ever so
much worth while
to kiss your lips
to muss your hair
to lay down side by side
to be together sun up
and sun down
our hearts are on fire
full of our compassionate desire

the JFer that this goes to will know....love you lots babe!:rheart:

oh i think everyones poems are really good