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Yuri 05-02-2007 11:48 PM

haha, sissy, you wont get angry silly, I know you to well, lolz

SweetSuicide 05-03-2007 12:35 AM

wow, I can like relate to them like more than i expected. I like that. You have a really cool style when you write.

drakenjecht 05-03-2007 12:38 AM

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Yuri 05-03-2007 12:39 AM

do you want me to write one here, or on my thread is what you would like better?

drakenjecht 05-03-2007 12:42 AM

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Yuri 05-03-2007 12:53 AM


Unbreakable

I’m up again
From this day
You tried to take my heart away

From the start
We fell apart
But we are unbroken
Ever since we have spoken


(New poem next)

Ocean View

As the waves go to and fro
The sun sets
To its home
This happens as I wonder…
In my home upon a hill
I have an ocean view
Tears I cry
Have come to me
From the sea
Salty wet, as they are so fresh
Just as I wonder
About the ocean
Tears of pain
Streak down my face
As I now know
They are from ocean angles
That come now
To take me home

drakenjecht 05-03-2007 12:58 AM

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Yuri 05-03-2007 01:01 AM

aww...thanx drakey. I have some more in my poem book, do you want them too?

drakenjecht 05-03-2007 01:02 AM

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Yuri 05-03-2007 01:18 AM

ok, I b-or-ed nows


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