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XjapanFOREVER 07-02-2007 04:53 AM

I Like'em!
Good Work!

ilovedaisuke7 07-02-2007 03:53 PM

oh wow, those are some amazing poems! i really liked "My Love" the best! very good work!

pixuli 07-02-2007 05:59 PM

ow, I really like them. Do you mind if I use "Lost" in my doujinshi??
It fits perfectly where Reita dies *--*

XjapanFOREVER 07-02-2007 06:06 PM

Would you mind if I posted one?

Harakiri 07-02-2007 06:52 PM

Is poet still that long these days????
Cuz people prefer short poets.

lpdirufangirl09 07-02-2007 08:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by pixuli (Post 167060)
ow, I really like them. Do you mind if I use "Lost" in my doujinshi??
It fits perfectly where Reita dies *--*

sure. as long as i get credit, please. i'd love to check it out when you're done.=]


Quote:

Originally Posted by Harakiri (Post 167101)
Is poet still that long these days????
Cuz people prefer short poets.

sometimes i have a lot to get out.

CPU 07-02-2007 08:36 PM

Love the poetry and I feel the pain of your heart, but no man is worth it, move on as you deserve better :vsign:

lpdirufangirl09 07-02-2007 10:21 PM

thanks. and i have moved on since these writings. i'm trying to write something new. haven't written in a while.

Acidreptile 07-02-2007 10:26 PM

I did not liked most of them because they are about love and that's a empty subject.But I liked "Pieces" and "Fantasy vs Reality"!

lpdirufangirl09 07-02-2007 10:30 PM

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Originally Posted by Acidreptile (Post 167409)
I did not liked most of them because they are about love and that's a empty subject.But I liked "Pieces" and "Fantasy vs Reality"!

yeah, for a little while that's all i could write about. i'm trying to expand my writing horizons. any suggestions?


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