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trapped again in this box
a box what i call plain work evening come sooner |
breaking walls
my fists are bleeding a ray of light |
under the starry sky
warm breeze welcomes me is this summer sign? |
Unable to breathe,
Your eyes into mine, Your indescribable love. |
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spitting the blood aching fists to fight is to lose |
nervous sweaty palms
another glance your way dare I approach you? Baaaaaaaaaaaaaah Its hard to come up with something that creates atmosphere in so few words!!! |
Minority against majority
Maniac madness invasion Chaos unleashed Only one shall win |
that's the whole point ^^
running down the hill away from your past to fall down and break your neck 1... 2... 3... 4... metaphors in just 3 lines o_O i'm getting the hang of this... Quote:
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Yeah yer pretty good at it :D
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-there must not be more than 3 lines per haiku -haiku is not a report or description of surroundings, usage of irony and juicy metaphors is highly welcome. |
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