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A Song Of Mine
This is something i just wrote awhile ago, its a short acoustic song that ill post a link for later.
"Why Stars Never Come Down" The Stars Are Out To See... Seeking The Attention They Hope To Meet... So They Fall Down To This Place... End Up Sleeping Without Even A Hi. As Far As I See This Worlds Just A Painting With Gentle Strokes & Things Colored Brightly... But This Is All We Can See... To Cover Up What Really Lies Benath... Which Id Rather Not See... But As I Grow Older Things Catch My Eyes... My Mind Comes To A Holt.... As Far As I Use To See This World Was Just A Painting With Gentle Strokes & Things Colored Brightly But Thats Before... & Thats Why Stars Never Come Down... |
Aw, that's kinda pretty. I really like the lines:
"As Far As I Use To See This World Was Just A Painting With Gentle Strokes & Things Colored Brightly" And just to be really nit-picky for a split second, you made a few typos while posting it. Anyways, over-all, I really liked it. Very well-done. |
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