i have this other poem, but it has a lot more room for improvement. i did them for homework (meaning during science class while the teacher was talking on and on and on), so it's not so great. any suggestions?
Quote:
Writing a Sonnet
Making every two lines rhyme
isn't easy work.
It's such a waste of precious time
that ¡t's driving me berserk!
And even when I use
poetry.com,
there isn't much to choose
e.g. prom, balm, bomb.
At least I only need
five lines more
If I write at superhuman speed,
I'll finish soon for sure.
Now for the closing couplet-
And I'm done with my sonnet!
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