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Originally Posted by masaegu

Could someone correct the following sentence? Any corrections will be appreciated. I'm most unsure about the 'monopolizing the eyes' part. Would an English speaker say that? Thanks in advance!

"I long to be a player like him, who can influence others and who can monopolize the eyes of the fans."

"I long to be a good player like he is, who influences other people and who is an idol(or role model) in the eyes of his fans."

Monopolizing means to assume complete control or possesion of someone, and would sound a little weird to whoever reads the sentence