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12-07-2007, 04:52 AM
i always love your artwork (fan of your mangas too XD) though im not much of a critic i would like to help if i can so here goes.
pic 1) i pretty much agree with the previous statement. the eyes are the big focus and seem to jump out at you (i saw them before i noticed eveything else) and myabe you should put her a bit off center, it makes the pic stand out a bit more ^^
pic 2) i just don't see anyway to improve it, its just awsome as it is ^^
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