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I have to present a japanese speech about myself and Australia (2-3 minutes) except I have no idea if this part of what I have done makes any sense.. your help would be greatly appreciated.
Thank you

konnichiwa. Murakami (Name of school) no gakusei yokurashiimashita. Watashi wa Morgan desu. Kyo, watakushi to oosutoraria no tsuite hanasu. Watashi wa juu go sai demo juu roku gatsu desu. Otanjoobi wa tsuitachi roku gatsu moichiyoobi bi ni oosutoraria fuyu desu. Gakoo ni oosutoraria no fuyu wa ikura ka no fukusoo ni tsuitakoosoku desy. Tokidoki samui demo sukafu (scarf) to gulovsu (gloves) kinakerebanarimasen. Boka no iro kite wa ikimasen. Watashiwa koko ni nensei desu. Nihongo to shkaika gaku to kagaku to kokugo to suugaku to shakyo benkiyosuru. Ichiban sukina kamoku wa nihongo desu ne.