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05-04-2008, 09:27 PM

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Originally Posted by Cyclamen View Post
I'm sorry, but both plotlines sound a little "stereotyped" to me.
Try thinking about something more original... poor girl who has to save friends and family/ girl who doesn't know her parents/ evil powers threathing her life... all these points have already been used into thousands of manga, anime, cartoons and novels.

Anyway, good luck with your work!
Do u have any suggestions???

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Originally Posted by Crani View Post
Number one is good, but she shouldn't be chased by the King, it should be wired assasins or something like that.
That's what we were kinda thinking! We were gonna have it to where assasins (hired by the king) were gonna chase the girl....or something like that^_^'

Last edited by matt19261 : 05-04-2008 at 09:30 PM.
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