[YukisUke]

Overall, it looked like a resume for a job rather than a personal statement. But it was still good. I was told from my friend at school that colleges and universities want to hear more about the person and their interests instead of their achievements. I have arrived at the time where i have to start writing my personal statements, so i'm very nervous about it. Anyone have advice for me?
(P.S.-I plan to major in journaliam and writing.)