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10-19-2008, 10:37 PM
When it comes to giving critique, I'm usually very smooth.
But I'm sorry.
I couldn't get past the first paragraph. I lost interest in slugging through a pure pit of sludge.
The grammar, the pure slaughter of the English language. I agree fully with Thirdsight.
- “I've been lucky. I'll be lucky again.” -
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