[amuchan]

It was more like a story then poem. There were some slices of humor in it though, the way you put things I mean. But besides that, I really did like it. It really does give off a sense of dread and mixed emotions. 5 stars

The cliffhanger at the end though, I thought before I read the ending, I thought it was going to be your soul or something that was dying. Nice cliffhanger