[Salvanas]

Originally Posted by LaVon

it was only a rough draft. what i meant was my rough drafts never have a structure. And just to let you on a word of advise, smart person, it does. I know.
Oh, and sorry about rushing. I cant help but rush typing down a story when I have a story on my head. Here, to prove myself I 'll give you some of the revised peice.

It was much better, but you still need to work on it alot.

Also, I didn't get what you mean (The part I bolded). Was that aimed at me? Or Thirdsight?

Is that an argument against me saying that unique isn't always better?