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Please review...thank you :P - 10-22-2008, 11:04 PM

~*Hidden Here*~

Here in your arms I am hidden,
In your stare I am drowning,
On your lips I am melting.

Forever more I am prisoner to your soul,
my devotion,
our completeness.

Continually I am here,
Trapped if only by my will.
And crying at the way you love me.

So if all I remember is your scent,
your feel,
your laugh.
I can bear it,

Forever more.....
I am here,
Hidden in your love as deep as the seven seas.


I know that there is a thread for poetry but I want feedback so if you could be so kind...


"If I could follow my heart again it would be yours
with every breath I would find a way to love you more"
~With You by Josh Groban


"With you I have everything I have ever wanted. Simple and true. With loving eyes so beautiful." ~ With You by Josh Groban
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