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05-10-2010, 06:47 PM
Cette version is quite readable, maisI have not used ma francais dans plus ans, except to read menus and curse at surly waiters.
I question the used of "grimper" in "et une question grimper:" a bit. I undestood it well, but depending on the level of the reader they may not.
C'est bon!
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