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Originally Posted by dogsbody70
I can see you have had marvellous help Yuri
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Hi, dogsbody70.
Yes. I’m sure they are great.
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Maybe one could start with, " I was desperate for the bathroom." Meaning "I was desperate to get to a bathroom."
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I see. “I needed to go” was not enough.
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Yuri the above sentence is fine-- another way of mentioning the change to the stairs could also be: " I managed to climb or clamber UP THE STAIRS UNTIL I REACHED/ THE TOP/ EXCEPT/ suddenly they had changed/ or turned? into a vaulting box"
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Yes! It’s “turn into”! I should have written that!
Actually, I wanted to say that my hand managed to touch the top of the stairs when the top of the stairs suddenly turned into a vaulting box.
So the sentence should be;
“I managed to reach the top. Then except suddenly they had turned into a vaulting box.”
Is that right?
Does “I reached the top” mean “my hand touched the top of the stairs”?
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i THINK DREAMS ARE A GREAT WAY TO PRACTICE WRITING BECAUSE IT STRETCHES THE
IMAGINATION. yOU ARE DOING SO WELL.
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Thank you very much!