Thread: Young Love Poem
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dogsbody70 (Offline)
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03-09-2011, 11:25 AM

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Originally Posted by SaraNeko View Post
leave me a quick reply and tell me what u think of my poem please and thank you. ^__^

is english your first language.

sorry my broken arm causes my bad typing just now.

why not reread your poem and see how it could be improved then show us again.
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