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06-27-2011, 02:18 PM

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Originally Posted by masaegu View Post
I am trying to compose a message in my rudimentary Chinese. I would really appreciate it if someone could correct the sentences below. Please correct only the bigger mistakes as I do not wish to appear to know much more than I actually do. Thanks in advance!

1.「您是我遇见的最佳的针压法治疗师。」
2.「我真正地希望您能回来到日本。」
3.「我的母亲同样等待您的回归。」 再来?回归? 
4.「現在在东京天气是热和非常潮湿的。」
Here is what I will use:

1.「您是我遇见過最好的针压治疗师。」
2.「我很希望您能回来日本。」
3.「我的母亲同样等待着您回来。」  
4.「东京現在的天气炎热和非常潮湿。

thrid sentense looks weird, but thats the best i can do..
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