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Need Songs Translated To Japanese!!! - 07-11-2008, 07:33 PM

i really want to know what my songs are like in japanese...if anyone is able, could they please translate them????? here they are......


Sin and bleed

(Echo) ring around the endless days,
a pocket full of razorblades...

(Keyboard intro)

she holds her breath,
and counts to three,
she shuts her eyes,
so she can see,

her life will flash,
before her eyes,
the moment right,
before she dies,

outside she looks ok,
but underneath,
her soul decays,

she waits for death,
she plants the seed,
her only hope,
to sin and bleed!

(Drum intro into next verse)

hold your breath,
embrace the bitter chill of death,
its icy fingers,
in an icy grip,
into ins trance,
you’ll surely slip,

forlorn and forgotten,
lost inside,
but not unaware,
that they wouldn’t care,
if she wasn’t there,

and so she breathes_____

(instrumental 2 bars)
(scream) breathe
(instrumental 2 bars)
(scream) breathe
(instrumental 2 bars)
(scream) breathe
(instrumental 2 bars)
breathe______
(scream) sin and bleed!

(Instrumental)

she will fall down,
down deeper down,
into her mind,
in thoughts she drowns,

the scene is blurred,
but she sees clear,
that there’s no life,
left for her here,

she prays to god,
but he’s not listening,
as she’s bleeding,
red and glistening,

pieces of her,
heart are scattered,
all on the floor,
now never more_____

(drum intro)

(scream) she calls out

let me out
(scream) let me out
out of this hell,
I call my home,
let me out
(scream) let me out
set me
(scream) free don’t leave me
all alone
let me out
(scream) let me out
this pain is to much,
I am breaking,
let me out
(scream) let me out
so I can stop this
constant aching______

(instrumental 2 bars)
(scream)breathe
(instrumental2 bars)
(scream)breathe
( instrumental 2 bars)
(scream)breathe
( instrumental 2 bars)
breathe_______
(scream)sin and bleed!

(Echo) slashes, slashes,
we all fall down...

The more I think, the more I wake
(intro)
I’m surrounded
by faces with no names
and they can't see me
as I’m lying here in chains
their eyes are clouded
their minds are filled with lies
as the helpless go on bleeding
and the tortured choke and die

they can't see us
can't see past their mundane lives
can't see the blood
can't hear the words that stab like knives
won't see the wounds that they've inflicted
until it's much to late to cure
while dreams are crushed
and voices hushed
by the ones that think they're pure

pre chorus:

insanity
cruelty
caged inside
locked and unseen
reality
is choking me
outside I’m fine
inside hearts scream
chorus:

and the pain that we feel
is all too real
as we wait
in the shadows
for someone to heal
broken hearts
torn apart
and then
thrown in our faces
disappear
and leave empty
hollow dark spaces


as the rain falls
from above us we're glad
cause it hides what
comes from eyes when we're sad
they don't notice
scars from pain through the years
as the words that we're speaking
fall on unhearing deaf ears
(pre chorus)
(chorus)

forgotten
alone
and in pain
the solitude
drives me insane
so crowded
at the same time
I'm lonely
if only they'd listen
if only______

Suicide note

empty eyes,
and suicide,
starless skies,
and cyanide,

broken dreams,
and blood-stained clothes,
rip-torn seams,
a bloody nose,

drowning in,
her own black tears,
every sin,
and all her fears,

lost in thought,
inside her mind,
from her fate,
she cannot hide,

empty shell,
her soul is sold,
body limp,
numb, hollow, cold

sticks and stones,
have broken her bones,
sticks and stones,
sticks and stones,

like acid rain,
can’t take the pain,
of sticks and stones
sticks and stones,

the air grows thin
makes her head spin,
among sticks and stones
sticks and stones
sticks and stones,
sticks and stones______

(bridge)

trapped inside,
this dark abyss,
waiting for,
death’s bitter kiss,

freedom is
an illusion,
masked by fears,
and confusion,

her pale face,
is left for dead,
many tears,
her eyes have bled,

hope is lost,
her sins lay bare,
everyone ,
just left her there,

suffering,
for her ends soon,
last time that,
she sings this tune,

with the last
glimpse of daylight,
with the last,
strangled breath,
she takes tonight,
she’ll cease to exist,
it’s death she’ll insist,
to rise above,
until she becomes,
just- a- pile- of-
(chorus 1x)
(instrumental)

Voodoo doll baby

Voodoo doll baby
voodoo doll child
voodoo doll baby
when's the last time you smiled?

Voodoo doll baby
with pins in your side
voodoo doll baby
how many nights have you cried?

The painted smile
you wear has faded
through a million
tears you've waded

reaching out for
a hand to take yours
to take you from
your deep despair

but there's no hands
no one to help you
nobody seems to care
do they even see you there?

Chorus:
all alone
in no mans land
standing without a shadow
living without a dream
just there
the soul
departed long ago from a body
rotted away from the inside
left bare

voodoo doll baby
with dreams so broken
your hearts been torn
with cruel words spoken

they think you are numb
but you can still feel
and each strike the give
is all too damn real

you tell them to stop
but they aren’t listening
the blood from your lips
is gushing and glistening

(instrumental)

a pull of your pin
a stab to you heart
now the lie on the floor
like you were in the start

chorus:
all alone
in no mans land
standing without a shadow
living without a dream
just there
the soul
departed long ago from a body
rotted away from the inside
left bare

voodoo doll baby
what have you done now?______

Open Window

Can you hear
the unknown voices,
faint sounds
behind closed doors,
belonging to
nameless faces,
curiosity grows ever more,

the ice wind blows
outside your window,
and darkness creeps
from part closed curtains,
but the light beneath your
doorway,
brings on valid fear and pain,

All the words
you want to say,
every time,
just fade away,
father’s always drunk,
mother hides it all,
big happy family,
you can’t recall,

they say a closed door
leads to an open window,
but the window can’t be found,
your window bolted shut,
mother’s on the ground,

(Instrumental)

the faintest whispers
fade away,
last hallway light
turned out,
left in silence,
to fall asleep,
to the rhythm
of wind and
silent tears,

they say a closed door
leads to an open window,
but the window can’t be
found,
you window bolted shut,
mother’s in the ground.

Death is Bleak

it likes to cry,
I hate the sound,
it should be put,
far underground.

The dirt blockades,
The wretched noise,
Not allowed,
With other toys,

When it screams,
I smell the fear,
A putrid smell,
To burn and sear

Let’s play a game,
It’s not so hard,
Just play dead,
Your highest card,

It talks too much,
To silence it
I’ll sew it shut,
the dead don’t speak

(Bass intro)

Chorus:
Hush now little nothingness,
Hush now and be still,
I don’t want to hear your voice,
Now no one ever will,

(Scream) The dead don’t speak
(Sing) Only silence
(Scream) Death is bleak
(Sing) Nothing more
(Scream) The dead don’t speak
(Sing) Hush now, horrid thing
Stay now behind your coffin door (No music)

Fingers tapping,
Nails scratching,
Eyes are staring,
Putrid thing,

Faux innocence,
But I’m immune,
You’ll be six feet,
Under very soon

(Insane laughing)

It’s ugly face,
A horrid sight,
I’ll rip it off,
To my delight.

It’s not a game,
I want you dead,
I’ll slit your throat,
To rest your head,

So stupid thing,
No never clever,
Stay in your grave,
And sleep forever__________

(Chorus)

no more noise,
and no more sound,
now in its place,
far underground.

Haunted

Demons swimming
in my brain
I swear they’re
driving me insane
Voices screaming
Can you hear?
Whispered memories
In my ear

Frost on the windowpane
Chilled breath of those
Forgotten long ago
Secrets dwelling underneath my skin

Ghosts of my past return
To haunt me here
Their voices haunt me like
The dark, and they are tearing
Me apart

Innocence
I brought from home
With me
Won’t matter when they come
For me
Close my eyes cause I can’t
Take it in

Tears from a guardian
Angel
Long lost, and far away
There’s nothing left
To take away the pain

I’ll find a hole to hide
Inside
Until the hurt’s at bay
When it’s over
I’ll go and face the rain

Chorus:
Haunted
Deep inside
Drowning
The tears I’ve cried
Haunted
By my sorrow
I wait, in pain
For a dead tomorrow

I am falling
Far from grace
I’m empty
I can’t find my place
All these voices
In my head
They make me wish that
I were dead

My mind is hearing things
My eyes don’t see
My eyes are seeing things
So horrifying, frightening
To me

I fell so broken down
Unfixable
I am grasping to my
Sanity and clarity
I’m so

(Chorus)
(Instrumental)
(Chorus x2)

The air is cold
Today
The sky these days
Is grey____


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07-11-2008, 08:22 PM

That's about $250.00 project.
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07-11-2008, 08:45 PM

....that....was the best i've ever red.....
*worship, worship*

im not jokin around, wut u've written is....so..inspirational....
it makes me feel like wut i write is nothing.....

write more songs!!!
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That's about $250.00 project.
don't cheat your self, that's about 1500 words- with 300wpp my count is at 300USD
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07-12-2008, 10:55 PM

Unfortunately, the songs are quite complicated, it would take a real professional to make a decent job of this. That, or a native speaker.


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Unfortunately, the songs are quite complicated, it would take a real professional to make a decent job of this. That, or a native speaker.
O_o i had no idea it would cost so much!!!!!
does anyone know a native Japanese person who could translate it????
or maybe a very acurate translating site????


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07-16-2008, 02:31 PM

if anyone knows a very accurate translation site, can you let me know?


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07-16-2008, 03:21 PM

Songs are also doubly tricky if you want it to rhyme/work in another language with the music. I don't think there are any translation sites if you're talking about something automating a good translation for you... There are plenty of sites you could look up the words individually, but that wouldn't do you much good.

Like what others have said already, you need a really professional person to make a good translation for you and it will cost you.

Good luck.
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