書く練習。私の一番好きなゲームがCiv3です。

[Ronin4hire]

今日は休み日ですから、Civ3をするつもりです。しかし� �これをするの前に　家を掃除しなくちゃいはいけませ� �。残念ですね。それに今夜、友達と、スタジアムに私� �町のサッカーチームを見に行きたいけどあまりお金が� �いから、まだ行くを決めリません。大変ですね！　お� �持ちになりたい！

明日、大学がある。9時に政治学のクラスがあるから、� �日、何時かにしゅくだいもします。

(Because I have a day off today I'm planning on playing Civ3, However before I do this I have to clean the house. Too bad. Anyway, tonight I want to go to the stadium to watch my hometown soccer team but because I have little cash, I still haven't decided on going. (Life is) tough. I wish to become a rich person.

Tommorrow I have school. At 9 I have a politics class so sometime today I must also do homework.)

Hehe... please correct and give me advice.

[Ronin4hire]

今日は！

今日、少し大変だ。今朝、政治学があったけどはやくお きたからおそくになった。たいてい、政治学が面白くて 、楽しいけど、眠かったから、つまらない。クラスの後 、友達の仕事に話に行って、あるいて、家に帰った。明 日、日本語のテストがあるから、今夜、勉強するつもり だ。多分運動するもつもりだ。

所で、昨日の夜、スタジアムに行かなかったけど、行き たかった！私のチームが勝った。すごい！　得点は4-1！　

(Hello!

Today was a little tough. This morning I had a politics class but because I woke up late I was late. Usually politics is interesting and fun but because I was sleepy it was boring. After class I went to my friends work to speak with him then walked home. Tomorrow I have a Japanese test so tonight I plan to study. I will probably also do some training.

By the way, Last night I didn't go to the stadium but I wanted to! My team won. Cool! The score was 4-1)

Please correct and give me advice

[MMM]

今日は　will be read "kyou wa"

Use　こんにちは.

But you are doing great!

[Ronin4hire]

Originally Posted by MMM

今日は　will be read "kyou wa"

Use　こんにちは.

But you are doing great!

Thank you

[masaegu]

こんにちは。

なかなか良い日本語ですね。よく勉強しているのがわか ります。大きい間違いは基本的にはないと思います。単 語レベルでいくつか直させていただきます。

休み日　　　　＞＞　休日、休みの日
するの前に　 ＞＞　する前に
しなくちゃいはいけません　＞＞　しなくちゃいけませ ん、しなければなりません
行くを決めリません　　＞＞　行くかどうか決めていま せん


今日、少し大変だ　　＞＞　今日はすこし大変だ
はやくお きたからおそくになった　　＞＞　おそくおきたので遅 刻（ちこく）した
友達の仕事に話に行って　＞＞　友達の仕事場に話しに 行って

I really think you do a great job at omitting enough I's and me's, which makes your Japanese sound very natural. You probably have a very good teacher, too, because poor ones will always tell you to use pronouns as if Japanese were a European language or something.

[Ronin4hire]

Originally Posted by masaegu

こんにちは。

なかなか良い日本語ですね。よく勉強しているのがわか ります。大きい間違いは基本的にはないと思います。単 語レベルでいくつか直させていただきます。

休み日　　　　＞＞　休日、休みの日
するの前に　 ＞＞　する前に
しなくちゃいはいけません　＞＞　しなくちゃいけませ ん、しなければなりません
行くを決めリません　　＞＞　行くかどうか決めていま せん


今日、少し大変だ　　＞＞　今日はすこし大変だ
はやくお きたからおそくになった　　＞＞　おそくおきたので遅 刻（ちこく）した
友達の仕事に話に行って　＞＞　友達の仕事場に話しに 行って

I really think you do a great job at omitting enough I's and me's, which makes your Japanese sound very natural. You probably have a very good teacher, too, because poor ones will always tell you to use pronouns as if Japanese were a European language or something.

Thanks for the advice and the encouragement

[Shadowulf]

how long have you been learning japanese for?

[Ronin4hire]

Originally Posted by Shadowulf

how long have you been learning japanese for?

This is my first year at university, so about 8 months?

Anyway, I've decided to make this thread my journal, but any advice, encouragement or criticism is welcome of course

こんにちは

今日、雨が降ったから、大学に行きたくなかった。しか し、今朝は、日本語のテストがあったんだ。日本語の後 、友達と昼御飯を食べて、いっしょに国際関係に行った 。

友達の名前はシヤーンくんだ。中国から来たけど、ニュ ジランドに一年間ぐらい勉強している。この町にたくさ ん留学生がいる。それはすごい!

国際関係の先生は元気な人から、面白いと思う。もちろ ん、かもくも面白い。

国際関係の後、シヤーンくんと、LLC (Language learning centre) に行った。LLCで、日本語を勉強して、聞く練習と話す練 習をした。4時半ごろに一人で、LLCを出て、家に帰った� �シヤーンくんは中国語の学生におしえるから、残った� �

明日も、日本語のテストがある。すぐ、勉強するけど、 まず、晩御飯を食べる。

(Hello

Today I didn't want to go to school because it was raining. However I had a Japanese test this morning. After Japanese I had lunch with a friend, then went to International relations.

My friend's name is Xiang. He comes from China but has been studying in New Zealand for about a year.　There are a lot of International students in this city.　I think that's cool!

I think International Relations is interesting because we have a lively teacher. Of course the field of study is interesting also.

After International Relations, Xiang and I went to the LLC. At the LLC we did some study and practiced our speaking and listening. At about 430 I left by myself and returned home but because Xiang tutors Chinese language students he stayed.

Tomorrow I also have a Japanese test. Soon I will study, but first, I will eat dinner.)

[Ronin4hire]

こんにちは！

昨日は大変だった！　大学に行って、働いたんだ!

今日は天気がわるかった！　もちろん、今日も、大学に 行かなくちゃいけなかった。

所で、先週の週末に、電話をなくした。　しかし、友達 は新しい電話が買ったから、私に古いのを上げた。　電 話がちょっと古いけど大丈夫だ。

じゃあ、今夜、ちょっとうんどうして、Civ3をするつも� �だ。今週、勉強しすぎたから、休みをいるんだ。

(Hello

Yesterday was tough! I went to school and worked.

Today the weather was bad of course I had to go to school today also.

By the way, last weekend I lost my phone.　However because my friend bought a new phone, he gave me the old one. The phone is a little bit old but it's OK.

Anyway, tonight I plan to do a bit of training and play Civ3. I've been studying way too much this week so I need a rest.)

[enyafriend]

This is my first year at university, so about 8 months?

My, did you meant you had only been studying Japanese for 8 months or so?
What about your pre-U days. How long have you been doing Japanese then?
Or did you entirely did it in just 8 months?

I must say, with your current grasp of Japanese understanding, you would put many people who had been doing it for 2 or 3 or even 4 years to shame.
I'm sure you had been studying very hard. Well done.