chyoto sumimasen ga. anata wa boku no nihongo sensei des ka?

[Eyobe]

boku wa eyobe des. soshi te canadajin des. boku no ego wa ii ego hanashimase. ano, anata wa nihongo no sensei des ka? boku no nihingo wa anmari yoku ga arimasen.boku wa ego no sensei des yo.
boku wa ninensei des. nijunansai des. anata wa boku no tomodachi des ka?
domo arigato gozaimas.

[filiadragongurl]

err... I'm not trying to be mean, but if you want someone to language exchange with in Japanese, maybe you should stick to English. It looks like maybe you've learned the Japanese you know purely by speech without trying to write before? If you want some pointers on how to go about writing Japanese like you tried to above (and a valiant effort, by the way!) feel free to PM me. I'm American, but I can still give some pointers.