my own Naruto-style character

[animaniak]

Ok, so I came up with this character when I joined a Naruto Guild at Gaia.
It's not all that great, and he does look like a girl...but hey, I tried my best.

Anyway, most of my drawings have some sort of story behind them, even the abstract ones. So....

Name: Shin Ryoma of the Sound Village
Brief Bio: He was orphaned after Akatsuki members murdered his parents. He studies jutsu from other villages and creates his own. A prodigy....but not that strong physically. He's kind of a loner, too...



I don't think I should write down all the jutsu he knows...should I?

[Suki]

Loving it! So detailed... is that needles in his hand? *sniff* Haku... I still haven't gotten over his death...

Pd- As for the drawings on the right... lol

[animaniak]

Originally Posted by Suki

Loving it! So detailed... is that needles in his hand? *sniff* Haku... I still haven't gotten over his death...

Pd- As for the drawings on the right... lol

Yeah, they are needles. I mentioned that Shin likes to study other cultures's jutsu. The difference here is that the needles create vibrations and attack the inner organs of the victim...rather than just paralizing them and making them look dead (like Haku did....poor Haku.... )

Thank you for your comment ^_^

[Moodaddy]

nice drawing, i like the concept but your right he does look really girly. maybe you shouldn't have drawn him with his hand on his hip.^^ but otherwise its pretty kewl.

[Shiningmonkey]

He's cool. I'd like to hear more about him

[MarkDuff]

I like it though your right it does look like a girl but it is good...

[Tsuzuki]

hm... <.< I think it doesn't looks good .... to many mistaks with the proportion .

[animaniak]

Originally Posted by Shiningmonkey

He's cool. I'd like to hear more about him

Ok. Here is what I came up with...I konw I could've done better...but....meh

Name: Shin Ryoma

Gender: Male

Age: 19

Appearance:

5' 9'', with white hair and light skin. His eyes are a light blue.

His expression never changes, not even during battle. It appears as if he were emotionless to everything.


Bio: Shin's parents, both faithful follower's of Orochimaru teachings, died during battle againts the Akatsuki.
Orphaned at ten, and being the last of his clan, Shin trained in secret so he could one day destroy the Akatsuki and anything (or anyone) related to them.
As a child, Shin would leave the villae in secret and studied many forms of jutsu from other villages, including those from the Village Hidden in the Leaves and in the Mist.

Now, as an adult, his goal is to find the Akatsuki and kill them.

Rank: Jounin

Clan: Ryoma

Weapons/Equipment:
Tama Yokobue (musical instrument)
Hagane Needles (steel needles)
Shuriken
Suzu (bell earring)

Bloodline: unknown

Jutsu:

-Ninjutsu-
Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Clone)
Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Jutsu)
Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker) momentarily boost the user's reflexes

-Genjutsu-
Oto no Shi no Jutsu(Sound of Death) channels chakra through needles to create sound vibrations withing the body, thus attacking the internal organs and such while creating disturbing images.

Kaichou no Shi (Death's Melody) requires his Tama Yokogue and chakra. A marvelous song. Attacks the nervous system, causing the victim to sucumb to violent seizures.

Uta no Kamakiri no Jutsu (Song of the Mantis Jutsu) another song from his Tama Yokogue. A beautiful song with a hidden mantis screech to low for anyone to detect. This attacts the victim's nervous system and muslces and leaves them completely paralized.

Akumu no Jutsu (Nightmare Jutsu) The bell on his left ear isn't just for decoration. It brings the victims deepests fears to life while draining their chakra in the process. This also allows the user to attack while the victim is in fear.


-Taijutsu-
Otoga Senpū (Sound Whirlwind)

Similar to the Konoha Senpu (Leaf Whirlwind), but with a twist. A hidden sound is created from the force of the kick. This maily attacks the stomach or the brain. Slowly, but surely, the victim will feel "sick" (nausea).

-Custom Jutsu-
Seishin Daraku no Jutsu (Mind Corruption Jutsu) With his bell, Shin can create more illusions, but these will allow him to control the victim and have him/her do his bidding. Like a slave. After lifting his control, the victim will remember nothing of what happened.


-Kekkei Genkai-
Finaru Uta (Final Song) A dangerous jutsu in which Shin irritates his own vocal cords to imitate a mantis. Powerful, and deadly. Can kill anyone in the surrounding area...but this might cause Shin to either lose his voice forever....or die from the strain.

Summoning Contract:
Kamakiri Shou no Jutsu (Praying Mantis Summoning)

[trainswithsnakes]

A lot better than my characters. Although I put a lot of thought into them the drawings don't come out to good. And I can never have them create jutsu. It is so hard. But I did have the little sister of my first character creae a jutsu using flowers. Even so it wasn't too good. I am not going to get into the deep and long to type history and future of my characters but I will give a brief description.
Name: Hikari Mint
Age: 20
Hair: SHort, Brown
Eyes: Brown
Siblings: Hana
Teacher: Doesn't have one
Team Members: None
Other: She ran off (I'm still creating a reason)
Name: Hana Mint
Age: 13
Hair: SHort, brown
Eyes: Brown
Siblings: Hikari
Teacher: Formerly Sunako
Team Members: Usagi and Hiraagi
Other: She uses jutsu invovling flowers
Name: Rei Mint
Age: SOmewhere in her 20s
Hair: Long Brown
Eyes: Brown
SIblings: Ririka
Teacher: None
Team Members: None
Other: Left when Ririka was murdered. Joined AKatsuki. Hikari's cousin.
Name: Sunako MArasuki
Age: 25
Hair: Long Black
Eyes: Purple
Siblings: None
Teacher: None
Team Members: None
Other: She murdered Ririka. She was Hana's teacher but then died to a disease.
Name: Ririka Mint
Age: ???
Hair: Semi-short Brown
Eyes: Brown
Siblings: Rei
Teacher: None
Team Members: NOne
Other: She was thought to be dead but was alive and hiding. She later returned.
So yeahs....

[KikiBunny23]

Originally Posted by animaniak

His expression never changes, not even during battle. It appears as if he were emotionless to everything.

SESSHOMARU! only narutoified haha....but thats how fluffy is

great job also...now to keep it hidden form laura.....