Super Crazy Fantasy Land: Part 2
 

w00t. It's time for the remake baby. Yea im talkin bout pure confusing awesomeness. Jus t like last time. But we're gonna keep it going. All gotta do to play is:

1. Create a character (Give a name, origin, appearnce, and abilities, it can be of any race you can think of)
2. Talk about a story

Rules:
1. No other character controlling without permission.
2. No over-use of cuss words (none wanted)
3. No More than 5 abilities.
4. Make the story exciting.
5. all post must be at least 5 lines long and there is a 20 line max.

So who's in!

I shall begin!
 

My Character is an explorer who lost all of his memories and is currently on a quest to get them all back.

Name: Ty (known because of a tattoo on his back)
Hometown: Primavera (where he woke up)
Race: Human
Appearance: Dark Skin, fade hair, black hair, green trench coat, black pants, and black shirt.
Occupation: Jewel Collector
Jewels: Jewel of the Spartan (gives user extra speed and extra strength)
Weapon: Impactor (a cross between a shotgun, beretta, and an AK-47)
Groups:

Eh? Me I guees!

name: Miguel Reden
appearance:dark brown eyes, dark olive skin, curly black hair, barely any muscles, black shorts, black shoes, white shirt.
age: 13
origin: From, he doesn't remember
abilities:He meditaes, alot. Miguel can make energy and shadow balls, he's a pyrokintic (can make flames and control them at will)

You actually chose a real place. Olive Skin? R u an alien or a plae person?

olive is tan skin. I'm a human.

my crayons lied to me!

Well anyway, My story starts out wiht my self in Primavera, or Spring Town.

I am walking sunny street, with many flowers and townspeople. I walk into a store, to grab a bite to eat, when some guys with devilish red eyes begins to stare at me.
"Hey, what your damages," I asked the red eyed guys.
One of them answered,"We Are Devil Peak soldiers on an assignment to capture you."
"So what is your damage," said red eyed guy 2 as he unholstered his gun.

Miguel watched as the red eyed man aimed his gun at another man. "Cool, a fight," Miguel says, intrested.
"Wonder if anyone is going to die." For some reason Miguel was more worried for the men than the one with a gun being pointed at him. "Either way this is gonna rock!"

Targetted! The Brawler Runs!
 

"Hey, I don't want any trouble," said Ty with his hands waving in front of himself. "Please don't hurt me!"

"Kill him already," said Red Eyed man number 3. "The boss will get angry if we don't."

"Alright," sai RE man 2.

Ty unholstered his gun, "Looks like we got a fight!"

"Looks like we do," said RE man 1, as he drew his gun.

Shots went off and smoke was everywhere.

"You guys will never catch me," said Ty, as he escaped the diner place.

Ty left the diner place, but the RE men are right on his tail.

[How are these guys able to keep up with me , when I have such superior speed?] Thought Ty.

"Face you shall not escape," said RE man 2, he shot again, and the bullet hit a townsperson.

Ty's eyes turned a plae red when the shot townsperson fell dead.

The chase went on, but was ended when Ty stop on the edge on the town.

"You Hurt an innocent person," said Ty in the most fiery voice.

"Does it really matter. We hurt this entire pitiful town if it meant accomplishing this mission," said RE man 3 in a cold voice.

Ty charged at the men full speed, he was almost a blurr.

Miguel winced as the townsperson fell. He ran over and checked his pulse. "Dead," Miguel muttered, running to where he thought the RE men were. Miguel was at least a yard behind the battle, when he saw a blur charge one of the RE men. Miguel wasn't quiete happy to see a battle now, this was a life-death situation. Miguel moved his hands around, they made circles in the air and a bright yellow ball appeared, he shot it at RE men 3. The man cunvulsed then fell to the ground.