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hi hi - 03-28-2008, 01:54 PM

i like all of you peoples poems. heres one that i just wrote......(sucks though)

I HAVE FALLEN

I have fallen,
Into a place of complete darkness,
I cant find an outing.
I begging to remember you less and less.
Those wings that were on my back,
Have finally faded,
Turning the dark color of black.
The very same happened to my crown,
Its broken and it lay,
Forgotten on the ground.
I have always tried to save,
Those who really need me,
But it turns out I could not save myself,
I have fallen,
Into the darkest,
Of places.
Don’t try to save me.



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XrachelleX(miyuki)--the death master
emiluvsjmusic(emi)--the humanity taker
SHELKE17(tears of blood)--the tearing heart
auran(Hiugchi)--the cheer taker
NejimaCrazy(Matser X)-sanity destroyer
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03-28-2008, 06:21 PM

Nice work, both of you ^_^
I really liked your last one, Sphinx01


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03-29-2008, 03:36 AM

wow nice Sphinx01 now I am speachless.


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.............. - 04-08-2008, 07:10 PM

Ever Changing Eyes

Confused and ensnared by the allure of her gaze/

My thoughts ellipse a path around the seraphic beaty of

her silhouette as we depart our seperate ways/

First green as emerald stars, lighting the center

of heavens doorsteps/ Next hazel, seductively prying

open the core of my masculince/ I’ve realized to late

that now here I lie melted in ecstacy/ Exposed to a myriad

of emotions contained in her eyes/



By Sphinx

04-0608


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04-23-2008, 06:29 PM

Yo here is what looks like it will be only a piece to a song I'm currently writing entitled weight of the world..check out and hope u will enjoy the finished project comming soon!!!!


Dealing with pain from the wounds inflicted
by my attackers/ Cope with strain rested on
the back of Atlas/ Aint nothin left in me/ Can't even
stand up/ Layin in somethin out of this world/
Reachin my hads up/




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04-24-2008, 07:44 PM

Its hard to leave everything behind
But its a thing that i must do
Whether i like it or not
I just have to leave but not to say goodbye
Please do not give up, just give me sometime and ill be back
You should know how much i miss you
Its not easy to think that you are there crying and grieving
I pray to God that he make you strong
Because we still need time to get along
Wait for me so we can be the same as before
I LOVE YOU and I MISS YOU that is waht you should know.

PS: Dedicated for my friends and family in the Philippines, specially my MOM. Miss you so MUCH!


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04-25-2008, 12:51 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by superheel View Post
Its hard to leave everything behind
But its a thing that i must do
Whether i like it or not
I just have to leave but not to say goodbye
Please do not give up, just give me sometime and ill be back
You should know how much i miss you
Its not easy to think that you are there crying and grieving
I pray to God that he make you strong
Because we still need time to get along
Wait for me so we can be the same as before
I LOVE YOU and I MISS YOU that is waht you should know.

PS: Dedicated for my friends and family in the Philippines, specially my MOM. Miss you so MUCH!

POWERFUL!!!!!!


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.................. - 04-28-2008, 06:15 PM

Meeting at the Bridge:


From one to the next they appeared
the same/ To the eyes of men/
But the traveler sees with blind sight
And so each is recognized for it’s
Own beauties and pleasures/ Each
Presenting its own chance for freedom/

At last he approaches/ The mystery of a world
Enchanted by its own allure/ Seeing in itself
A dark serenity/…And there she stood- Beckoning
Him without words or gestures…not even a gaze to
Acknowledge his presence/ He spoke…she returned
His words with small conversation/ He bowed- and
Thus she allowed him to enter her world…if only for a short time/

From one to the next they appeared
the same/ To the eyes of men/
All the same but this/ This offered beauty…this
One offered adventure/ This offered him a glimpse
Of the Goddess in her world/ However brief his stay-
The traveler would call this world home/ Though he sought other
World…to this he returned..always


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04-28-2008, 06:20 PM

hey brother, how many instrumentals you think we will have on that mixtape, and have you thought of somethin already?


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04-28-2008, 07:30 PM

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hey brother, how many instrumentals you think we will have on that mixtape, and have you thought of somethin already?
Think u can pull off ten..*including the one u just sent me*?....And I have a few ideas or concepts for the material of the mixtape bro


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