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MitcheruOtaku 04-15-2008 12:55 PM

Here's another I wrote a couple of years ago:


Keep your chin up



Keep your chin up
and smile
they tell me
My head is down
my eyes are blurred
and stinging

Keep your chin up
and smile
my head is down
Like lead
Rain pours down
like tears
I cry alone in darkness
so no one sees or hears

Keep your chin up
and smile
My head is down
Can't see
can't think
can't feel
Keep my chin up
and smile...

~Mitcheru 07

BabyAnimeBoy 04-15-2008 02:54 PM

A samurai

Who am I, I’m wearing an iron helmet
Who am I, got an armor with a gilt
Who am I, I got a katana or a sword to kill
Who am I, when I do there’s no remorse to feel
I feel like I got no face at all
I end my enemies, and I disgrace em all
Leave there own race to fall
Disconnect there calls
From their vertebra to their brain
Same way my nation felt pain
They’ll feel a thousand more with my hand
I slave in anyone that stands in my way of my plan
I tell you if I die here
Then I die with honour as a samurai

superheel 04-15-2008 03:03 PM

I dont know what to say, but you always make my day.
You're someone who i really admire, while me is someone who no one desires.
While people praise you as a genious, to me they are so furious.
I wanted to someone like you, but it's a dream that will never come true.
I'm just glad that im your bestfriend, and you promised me that we wil always be until the end.

The Genious and the friend.

Kajitsu 04-15-2008 07:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku (Post 461015)
Here's another I wrote a couple of years ago:


Keep your chin up

...

~Mitcheru 07

Reminds me of when I was reprimanded for being upset:mad:
I hate that woman... I hope I never see her again!
:exballoon:

Kajitsu 04-15-2008 07:21 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku (Post 460751)
I Try to Help

I try to help
by reaching out.
Sometimes maybe
when I shouldn't.
Many times it may
not be welcome,
and even angers.
Once in a while
it can help
to heal.
Either way,
I try to help.

~ Mitcheru

... It does help, but forget I said that. I should not tell people my feelings, according to someone I know....

ミチェル、is this how your name is written? I couldn't get the 't' in it.

MitcheruOtaku 04-15-2008 09:18 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kajitsu (Post 461400)
Reminds me of when I was reprimanded for being upset:mad:
I hate that woman... I hope I never see her again!
:exballoon:

Sometimes people say the wrong things at the wrong time.

MitcheruOtaku 04-15-2008 09:20 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kajitsu (Post 461401)
... It does help, but forget I said that. I should not tell people my feelings, according to someone I know....

ミチェル、is this how your name is written? I couldn't get the 't' in it.

I'll post my name in Japanese tomorrow. It's on my computer at work.

SailorBratt18 04-15-2008 09:29 PM

Here's a song a wrote a week ago. It's called "Dear Eric"

Dear Eric

Dear Eric
Please read this letter
You don't have to agree
But it'll make me feel better

Eric, Eric
What have we done?
Looking at ourselves
What have we become?

Eric, Eric
What should I say?
So confused, I
Just can't walk away

[Chorus:]
Us together
Decisions we've made
All the lies
An' the fools that we played
Don't blame this on me
Because you played a part
You asked for this
Right from the very start

Dear Eric
Stabbed me in the back
Had to hurt my heart
Why did you do that?

Eric, Eric
Where should I go?
So unprepared
Could I have known?

Eric, Eric
What's your problem?
You should've told me
Not to hurt him

[Chorus]

Dear Eric
Know what you did?
Hate myself but
I continue to live

Eric, Eric
What have we done?
Looking at ourselves
What have we become?

Eric, Eric
What should I say?
So confused, I
Just can't walk away

[Chorus]
(2x) Right from the very start
Us together
Eric, dear Eric
All the lies
Eric, Eric
Don't blame this on me
Dear Eric...

SailorBratt18 04-15-2008 09:37 PM

Here's another song I wrote not too long ago. It's called "Red Sunset"

Warped Reality
Affliction of tears
Tweaked shadows
Making monsters under my bed
Sickly hearts
Dead wilted flowers
Creatures followed me here
A door has closed on the...

Chorus:
Red Sunset
Little footsteps
Come down the hall
Hear the voices
You think you know it all
Little whispers
Try to warn me
When the lights go out
What will I be?
I'm not a monster
I'm just me

Wind mills burned
Visions unseen
Chaos wreaking
In and out of dreams
Cathedrals fall
Walls closing in
Shattered glass
Make my fingers bleed like a...

[Chorus]

Dying laughter
Splinters deepen
Raw emotion
What constrain
Nightmares playing
Comfort the dark
Blinding sunshine
Keeps burning my skin
Where is my...

[Chorus]
A red sunset
There is no dawn

MitcheruOtaku 04-15-2008 11:45 PM

Great lyrics!


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