New drawing - Opinions should be great!

JohannaKyouyama · (#1 (**permalink**))

Hi Hi, I haven't been here for a while but I want you guys to see another one of my drawings... this is kind of weird but I like it a lot, I'm showing it in my dA and people really liked it... so... here it is

I made it trying not to make her cute but weird... I think it came out pretty well... as far as my hands could have done it...

hope you like it...

deathnotegirl · (#2 (**permalink**))

i think it's really good...i like it

d34thp0odle · (#3 (**permalink**))

it's nice ..
but i think you messed up with the fase ..
looks weird . and mean

BakaCrisis · (#4 (**permalink**))

Awesome pic, if you ever need someone to touch them up or color them Message me sometime ^_^

d34thp0odle · (#5 (**permalink**))

ah and .. think more about the position of the wings next times ..
it probably oesnt stand out .. but if you look closer it's totay weird

BakaCrisis · (#6 (**permalink**))

Death, I'm starting to believe you are a perfectionist with little optimism. Glass Half Empty kinda guy?

d34thp0odle · (#7 (**permalink**))

he wanted critisism (<.< that word right ?)
so i did tell him what i thought was wrong on first sight ..
it swell made and stuff
but shall i writw him what he did well and all that ?
i couldnt even do that .. im just some rude guy who would never be able to pull this drawing off ^^
i just thought .. i could tell him what i thought was negative ..
nothing more nothing less ..
so just ignore it if i was writing something stupid =o

also .. im bored and when im bored my emotions go a but lower ...
so im just writing what i think .. even if its a bit cold hearted *sorry*
=o

TalnSG · (#8 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by d34thp0odle

ah and .. think more about the position of the wings next times ..
it probably oesnt stand out .. but if you look closer it's totay weird

The bases of some of the wings are either too small to support the weight they seem to have, or at least one of them has a base coming out of the right side of her rib cage, hidden by her torso.

In any case the perspective is a little off because all of her wings seem to be coming off of on her right side. I suppose something could fly that way, but they would be prone to glide in circles and expend far too much energy for lift or anything else without bilateral wings.

Nekozawa · (#9 (**permalink**))

I agree with TalnSG.
But the facial expression really shows that she's either angry, or just a "don't come near me" sort of thing.
<3
I like it! >w<

kamikazee · (#10 (**permalink**))

i think it's a good one. can
you post the link for your d.a page