Post a poem!!!

[Yuusuke]

I had a dream.

I had a dream once, that I could fly. My feet levitated off the ground. I swear it was so surreal. My feet? Off the ground? I’ve never been on a plane. The first thing I remember doing in flying up to the sky and touching a cloud. Very fluffy and cool. If I could do this than the world is my oyster. I flew around, and saw the astonished looks on peoples faces. So overjoyed or surprised. I flew around the world. I went to Africa and rode an elephant, I went to France and ate cheese. I helped Cambodians doing field work.. Everyone was happy, they laughed they smiled. There was no war, No pain, No conflict, just peace. And I flew and flew and flew. But in this peace and happiness I realized it was too good to be true. I woke up. In this world, full of destruction and chaos, I laid in my bed, waiting to go back asleep. To escape once more

[nobora]

As I watch you From near by
My heart skips a beat
and all i see is you
But you dont see me
Not until I get the courage to tell you
My feelings for you

[VampireGirl1314]

the heavens are opening up to me
i fall to my feet
blood flooding out my mouth
you take the knife out
i cover my mouth
then one last time i finally scream
fall down and hit the floor
you kiss me goodbye
and you will see me no more.


you killed my life
you killed my spirit
you killed my time
and you proved it
now its time
for me to do it
i will give you time
i will lift your spirit
i wont kill your life
and this is how I'll prove it.


you have been waiting for me
but i have been waiting for you
i just haven't had time to see you
you have been away so this is all i can say
you and me are just the same
the passion we share is exciting
this energy you give me might just kill me
but its so sweet that i just cant stay away.

[sakari09]

wow....so sad...TT.TT

I'll post my new one tomorrow.

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by sakari09

wow....so sad...TT.TT

I'll post my new one tomorrow.

lolz thanks.xD

[darksyndrem]

The Chat Poem
Volume 1

If you build your heaven,
You find your hell
If you destroy your hell,
You keep on living well
But only time will tell,
never go to the wishing well
Your life would be at stake,
to make such a mistake as that
So take your time,
to make a dime
And into your heart,
will I shoot my dart
Back to the place,
So we can be us
We must stay in the race,
You have my trust
And 'till death's door,
May I be yours
And with my all honesty,
I tell you thee,
We---will be.
Free to the end to fight and defend,
Fly away and feel okay.


Contributers
VampireGirl1314
KikiBunny23
Yuusuke
Darksyndrem

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by darksyndrem

The Chat Poem
Volume 1

If you build your heaven,
You find your hell
If you destroy your hell,
You keep on living well
But only time will tell,
never go to the wishing well
Your life would be at stake,
to make such a mistake as that
So take your time,
to make a dime
And into your heart,
will I shoot my dart
Back to the place,
So we can be us
We must stay in the race,
You have my trust
And 'till death's door,
May I be yours
And with my all honesty,
I tell you thee,
We---will be.
Free to the end to fight and defend,
Fly away and feel okay.


Contributers
VampireGirl1314
KikiBunny23
Yuusuke
Darksyndrem

here is the score on our poem okay guys?


ome of the lines seemed forced, but other then that it's good. 4/5 for the flow of the poem, 4/5 for the message, and 4/5 for the image that the poem sets in my mind

i wont say who scored this because its a secret.xD

[Gerlandox]

LOL
you really own this thread dont you
Well ok
Ill just post a quick improvised one
Just 4 fun

Lost

My shining star has fade`t away, I`m lost,
cant find my way,
to the angels I pray
Would i find her anyway,
Would my pain go away?
Fuck it ...
I never believed in angels anyway...

Gerland

[Gerlandox]

Ah and sorry 4 the inappropriate word I used.

but Hey this is Art, they are no rules no recipes

[HungryForRamen]

Mind if I post a song instead? Pretty much like a poem but with a chorus.