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05-25-2007, 07:46 PM

Well I've been writing and I have two new poems, so here they are!!

Strenght My Love
Be strong my love for our end is near
Do not be afarid, do not shed a tear
Time will make our hearts grow stronger
Even if we are in the arms of another
My love for you is full and undying
Even at our deathbeds resting
If my love for you is a mortal sin
Then let my immortal life being
So now grabs the bottle and let the love slip away
Knowing that I'll see you again someday

Oh Happy Dagger!
the blade of the dagger is cold to the touch
But I i have to end it right now I must
this pain is unbearable, my life is too rough
I really am done with this mask of tough
Crimson red fills the page and turns to rage
None of you shall ever read this page
My world turns black with no turning back
Time won't stop and it's not running back
The blade of the dagger is cold tot he touch
Oh happy dagger, I love you so much!



Life goes on.
But I'm gone.
Cause I'll die without you.
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06-03-2007, 02:21 AM

Lonely Love

You’ll never know how I really feel
How much you make my world shine bright
Just a small smile from you makes me weak
You make me speechless with a wink.

My small confession of feelings for you
Knowing you’ll never know what you do to me
You give me hope when there’s none left
Your warm smiles brings me joy and peace

But we are in two different worlds
Worlds separated by hate and lust
And these tears fall because of my fears
My fears of never being happy without you

My trials and downfalls build
Then I get a sharp, cold chill
And the grim reality sets in
And now I cry for your touch that will never come

But we are in two different worlds
Worlds separated by hate and lust
And these tears fall because of my fears
My fears of never being happy without you

My trials and downfalls build
Then I get a sharp, cold chill
And the grim reality sets in
And now I cry for your touch that will never come



Life goes on.
But I'm gone.
Cause I'll die without you.
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06-03-2007, 11:50 AM

beautifull and sad... Just like black rose. I hope that all your darkness will be just wink of your eyes at the end, just like one black rose surronded by many colorfull ones.


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06-03-2007, 12:08 PM

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06-03-2007, 12:26 PM

umaaaiiiiii...
I felt very amusing reading your poem..
have you ever heard of " sen no kaze ni natte "?
if i'm not mistaken, it is taken from an english poem
-become a thousand wind-

now it is being performed as a song by an opera-like japanese singer called akikawa masafumi..FYI, this song is very superb coz it has been in oricon chart top 10 for more than a year starting may last year.. cool eh..
it sound a little like this..

watashi no ohaka no mae de
nakanai de kudasai
soko ni watashi wa imasen
nemutte nanka imasen
sen no kaze ni natte
ano ooki na sora wo fuki watteimasu


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08-05-2007, 02:10 PM

SS, I have inside information (from you ^_^) that you've done some more writing in the recent past. If any of them are poems, I'd sure like to see them here! If they're not then write one and post it here ^^




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