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Exclamation Get Ready! - 02-03-2007, 08:57 PM

I'm gonna post a bagillion of 'em! I've typed a lot of them up, so feast your eyes on the good, the bad, and the even worse...!
This one portrays some real feelings I actually had the day before I wrote this. I usually don’t write stuff about how I feel, but I wrote this at like two in the morning and in the dark…and I finished it at school the next day.
“Unprepared” written October 13th, 2006
I’m sitting here wondering when it’s going to stop
I’m staring at the floor with regret
I’m thinking of the world I lost
And memories I’ll slowly forget
I can’t do this today
Last night She broke down again
It was the first time She had truly cried
For the things She had back then
Sitting in the water
Trying to drown my tears
Trying to find something to stop it
Trying to confront my fears
I hate this place that I am at
I hate the things they do
But most of all, I hate the fact
That I can’t be with you
Tell me what my crime was
To deserve this pain
Tell me why I had to lose
The things that I had just gained
I hate myself for all of this
I hate myself for what I’ll do
Most importantly, though, is that
I hate myself for loving you
Since I left you behind
I’ve finally realized
When I needed you the most
You always stopped my cries
So tell me why we had to break
Tell me why you care
Explain to me the reasons why
I need you to be there
You’re like family to me
And family should know
That the worst thing ever is to
Tell them you have to go
I blame myself, and no one else
It was my choice to make
But I did not realize how much
One mistake could take
And now I’m trapped inside this world
Where nothing is ever right
Where everyone judges everyone else
I just wish I could see you tonight
I try to forget the pain
But from it I can’t run
And it always lingers with me
How much I miss everyone
Things get broken sometimes
Still we try to fix that which can’t be repaired
Things get us scared sometimes
Still we’re always caught unprepared
Dreams get shattered
You can’t pretend not to be scared
Even though you’ve thought things through
You’ll still always be caught unprepared
I’m so broken now
So afraid no one cared
Just wanted a moment of happiness
But I was unprepared


Is it any good? I just realized about 90% of my poems are way too long…!


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Arrow 02-03-2007, 08:59 PM

Here’s the boy I was telling you about. Kevin…or Ben, I’m not sure. Maybe they're the same person. But I know Ben had a little blonde-haired sister named Samantha, or Anna for short…sometimes AlleyMalley. Anyway, this poem’s a bit…dark…I guess. I changed a few things around while typing it. Here goes:
“Never Again” written November 8th, 2006
Perfect on the outside
Broken from within
His shattered happiness
Is the cause of the blood he now lays in
Heart broken, unloved
He’s lying on the floor
Unnoticed, hated
He’s finally found the cure
“Never again,” he wept one last time
“Never again,” he whispered in despair
“Never again,” he assured himself
“Never again,” he knows they won’t care
He’s not lying on the floor
Just so they pay attention
He’s dying on the floor
So his pain will never happen again
The kiss of death is welcome
Upon his perfect lips
He see its silent bliss as
Onto the floor his red blood drips
Lying there, he know it’s done
He knows he’s finally free
From all his pain; his suffering
From all that used to be
The words they say to him
The hate they always show
His pain deepened--if only they knew!
But they never wanted to know
All that was nothing now
As it faded into black
Never again, not for him
This time he’s not coming back…


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Arrow 02-03-2007, 09:00 PM

Here’s my attempt at writing a non-rhyming poem. I don’t really like writing non-rhyming poems, but…I tried!
“Empty” written April 30th, 2006
When one good thing happens
Something bad comes along
It’s either much worse, or equal
Why does my reality have to come crashing down?
Why can’t I just be happy for more than one day?
It’s something that’s inside of me
Growing stronger still
Until nothing good and happy is left to feel
‘Tis like a living death
Only with the sound of laughter
Tears are nothing
I have no words
What is there left to say?
Running into the dark side
I think I’m loosing me
And I’m becoming
Empty…


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Arrow More poems... - 02-03-2007, 09:01 PM

Okay, this one is a bit odd…it was meant to be sort of funny, but…I dunno, my sister says it’s the work of a psychopath’s stand up comedy…of course, I was like wtf? But, anyway…here it is, my psychopath comedy act:
“Straight To Hell” written May 2nd, 2006
I feel your movements as I become paralyzed
I see it dawn on you when I hadn’t realized
I listen to your heartbeat as mine slowly fades away
I hear your voice when there’s nothing I can say
I listen to you breathe as I take my last breath
I see you live on as I slip into my death
I see you smile when you’ve realized I died
I feel my soul go straight to hell when you hadn’t cried
I watch you live your life as I’m so unwell
So then I make you do things
So you’ll be with me in hell
Well…you should’ve cried for me when I went straight to hell…


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Post Another Poem - 02-03-2007, 09:03 PM

Here’s an unfinished poem that I JUST NOW finished (the last three lines). The part in the middle makes no sense…hell, I don’t even remember writing this poem! It hasn’t got a title, and so I’m open to suggestions!
UNTITLED written October 18th, 2006
Let’s take a walk
So I can explain
The reasons why
I feel this pain
I’m not quite sure
About the definite
But I know my worries
Are infinite
Right the ring
Some voice will say
Spin the clock
Find the new way
But what does that mean?
Let’s look at her fears:
Loss, normality, regret,
Vulnerability, and tears
Things I’ve already experienced
Things that always stay
Ice inside my heart
That won’t ever melt away


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Smile And here's the last one for today - 02-03-2007, 09:05 PM

Here’s a poem that…well…it’s difficult to explain the feelings this poem represents…it’s a unique feeling; a trademark of Laina and Laina alone. It really has very little to do with love…but love is an easy thing to write about for me. I don’t know why. Honestly, I think love is over-rated, lol…probably because people are so quick to say they love me (except my mom, she hates me, lol and never says I love you unless it’s just to piss me off) but they never really know me when they say that, so I just wave it off and laugh at them when they want me to answer back and I say “Sorry, evil doesn’t love” lol…J
“Just To Hear You Say” written October 26th, 2006
The wind whispering
Through your hair
The once common smile
That now is rare
The words I wish you could hear
The words I wish you could say
The very things I need to feel
The very reason you should stay
Why must you test me
With a wish, a hope, a dream
Why must you torture me
And make me bleed and scream
I torture back--I know it hurts
You come back--you always will
You make me sad--you always did
I make you smile--your breath is still
The moon is glistening
On your hair
The world keeps turning
But no one cares
I own you and always have
As you’ve owned me through your way
Trying not to notice things I do
Just to hear you say
Blood and pain
Love and tears
Hope and passion
Comfort and fears
Why must we do this to ourselves
The hate, the love, and the strain
Why can’t we just be in love
And calm each others’ pain
Yet, the word love does not fit here
It’s only a painful word that implies
“We want to be together”
It’s a word both sides always denies
Holding me in your arms
How can you understand?
You’re breaking both our hearts
Every time you touch my hand
I see it in your eyes-your loving way
But the pain-it always does stay
Say I love you-what must I do
Just to hear you say it, too…?


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02-03-2007, 09:22 PM

wow, they are very good. I like them evry much, do you have any others?


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i am the tears that fall, you are the blood on my skin, we are mingled forever again, here we stand, hand in hand, but ill let go when my time has come, time for u to fly alone
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02-04-2007, 09:23 PM

Those are amazing! you're a very good writer! You've read some of mine but you're are amzingly awesome comparded to mine.



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But I'm gone.
Cause I'll die without you.
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02-04-2007, 10:38 PM

I just have a different style than you, it doesn't mean I'm better...!
Thanks everyone!


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02-05-2007, 12:28 AM

I just wrote this one yesterday...enjoy!
"Melody" written 2/3/07
Can you hear the melody
It's from the distant past
A single tune so beautiful
You hope that it will last
A song that sings to you
Deep inside your heart
Sweet memories return to you
Whenever this song starts
Flowing like the wind
Drifting like the sea
Its simple notes and elegance
Gracefully set your soul free
Quietly it plays to you
Captivating your very essence
Deep sounds and soft tones
Reveal feelings of quintessence
The sincere tune wanders in
Listen to the alluring melody
It begins in simple notes
And progresses into harmony
Images of a white full moon
Over a cascading waterfall
Inside a luch green forest
The source of the beckoning call
A distant past remembered
Portraying memories unfulfilled
Such mysterious feelings return
And your pain is slowly stilled
Can you hear the melody
Playing softly in the past
One true harmony so blithe
Listen closely--it won't last


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