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Drawing of an angel - 05-06-2009, 07:50 PM

This angel has no wings. I love her and i decided to draw her.

What do you think about it and how can i make it better?
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05-06-2009, 07:59 PM

awsome drawing!!!


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05-06-2009, 11:19 PM

Wow good job on your drawing. I would suggest to work on her nose a little bit. You did a good job in her scale. Arms are well done and her hair too.
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05-06-2009, 11:29 PM

Ooh, very nice. The only suggestion I have is to make the lower arms and hands a bit bigger. Nice shading though, and the face is well-proportioned. Keep up the good work!



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05-07-2009, 12:46 AM

very good proportions keep it up!
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05-10-2009, 08:08 PM

You should make her lower arms a little thicker, and try to keep the eyes at around the same. (Or is that my eyes playing tricks?) If you like the hair in that type of style, then it's very good! ^^ But If you want more realistic, try drawing from the root.
I give it a 8/10! ^^
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05-10-2009, 08:37 PM

does she have such perfect breasts
oke sorry but I'm a guy so its normal for me to look at that first
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05-10-2009, 09:02 PM

the right shoulder looks a little....different from the left. But all in all, it's a good drawing, Im sure she appreciated it.


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05-10-2009, 09:05 PM

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the right shoulder looks a little....different from the left. But all in all, it's a good drawing, Im sure she appreciated it.
Yeah its a weebit longer. But its a good drawing yeah
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05-10-2009, 10:07 PM

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does she have such perfect breasts
oke sorry but I'm a guy so its normal for me to look at that first
Don't put all of us in that category!!! D:


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