simple art by me X)

ayabarnette · (#1 (**permalink**))

Hi everyone, I'm a member of deviantart, you may view my art gallery here:

ayabarnette on deviantART

I'm still developing my skill but I hope you have time to critique, if you're a member..since it will be very helpful for me. thanks.

manganimefan227 · (#2 (**permalink**))

すこ"いい!! How old are you? I ask because I am curious of whether or not I should be that good at my age (14). But yeah, AWSOME!!

ayabarnette · (#3 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by manganimefan227

すこ"いい!! How old are you? I ask because I am curious of whether or not I should be that good at my age (14). But yeah, AWSOME!!

I'm already 20. But most of my artworks there are from when I was younger. :P I bet you're better than me. and thank you too

KungMartin · (#4 (**permalink**))

Pretty good for non proffessional level=D

manganimefan227 · (#5 (**permalink**))

Nah, I need to work alot on clothes, shape and shading :P Still very far away . . . :P

honoraryjapanesegirl · (#6 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by ayabarnette

Hi everyone, I'm a member of deviantart, you may view my art gallery here:

ayabarnette on deviantART

I'm still developing my skill but I hope you have time to critique, if you're a member..since it will be very helpful for me. thanks.

Wow! That's great, Ayabarnette!! Keep up the great work! ;D

If you don't mind some suggestions on this site, I'll just give a few:

1. To remember the angle in which you are drawing. As a fellow artist, it's very hard to keep the angle of the subject, I TOTALLY understand that. I've had a few Uchiha Sasuke's turn out lop-sided...XDD lol...but, I noticed on the drawing: "The Sorceress", her hand seems to just lay staright down, whereas, her hand would most likely be resting on the ground on which she's sitting. But, if you wanted it that way, I can see the logic in that, too.

2. Also on most of the drawings, the girls' chests seem to be a bit lop-sided, and uneven. I have this same problem, don't worry.

It's hard to keep them even, (even in real life XD lol) but what I find helps, is if you draw one side, then put a ruler undernath it, and sketch where you want the other one to land. XD

3. I noticed on: "The Sorceress" that her legs seem to thin out too fast. Don't worry about making the legs too big; if you have the tendency to make them too small, aim for making them too big, anf they'll usually tuen out just about right.

Also, don't worry if the legs go off the paper, it's not a problem to the viewer. ^_^

Those are all the suggestions I have! I don't mean to be too brash, and sorry if I was! DX

I love your art work!! KEEP DRAWING!! XDDDDDDD

Have a wonderfully blessed day!

~HonoraryJapaneseGirl~

mavran · (#7 (**permalink**))

oh you have a talent
good works

I've added u to my devwatch and given a llama

btw u are cute hehe

manganimefan227 · (#8 (**permalink**))

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btw u are cute hehe

That doesn't sound like a stalker at all! XD

caisaki · (#9 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by ayabarnette

Hi everyone, I'm a member of deviantart, you may view my art gallery here:

ayabarnette on deviantART

I'm still developing my skill but I hope you have time to critique, if you're a member..since it will be very helpful for me. thanks.

Hi, I see you're from the Philippines! Ang galing ng drawings mo..

Anyway, I am amazed at how you balance your time. Being a law student is hard as I hear from other people.