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06-23-2007, 05:52 AM
It really good, sis!!! Write some more!!! like what happen after that!!!
You can treat this whole first story as the beginning of your vampire story, then explan it further about the life of Jonh as a vampire i guess, pretty much anything, like vampire power, seek his ultimate enime the vampire that killed his love etc...
cann't hardly wait for more!!
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FOR THOSE WHO BELEIVE THAT HEAVEN REALLY EXIST, THERE IS A WAY TO HEAVEN
 My JF Family
Brother of ToKyObOxRoBoT, Nightmare
Cousin of Jo_Kittie
Great Grand Father of lollijenn
Uncle of Hentaro
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