@onex-san - Not at all. I think they accent the poem too. I've never used them in my poems so I was just trying to learn if there was a specific way in which you use them. For e.g. most of the lines are three words so having one word lines is basically one third of a normal line. If you had used say.. seven words per line and again used one word lines it would look even more apparent but that might not have achieved the theme you were weaving.
So before I end up confusing myself and everybody else here, I was just trying to learn how people use one word lines so I could experiment with them later. I think it's a great poem! Go onex-san! *whoots*
@Tifa -
sca-ree! Short but very descriptive. Nice going!
@SweetS - Sis!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's been so long! Excellent poetry as always. It's just amazing how you come up with stuff like that. I've made a nice little SweetS collection from all the poems in your old thread. It's sooo goood to see you here *hugs x a million*