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Originally Posted by Nki
Mmmm, very interesting... I´m feeling it.. I find interesting the "past character"... I dont know why I see myself reflected in this character (and I just read this shot part of the story)... in the other hand.. the girl looks very very powerful character... in fact... maybe she is the "reason" for the "past" guy.... and the cancer character... mmm.. maybe if he does not die in the story, he is already dead... its just matter of time)
Lovly characters you have... maybe you could write 3 "pre-endings"... write one if the past character die, one if the lady die and another one for the cancer character...
then sleep, a nice and peaceful napp... wake up and read the 3 "pre-endings" and choose the one that fits into the story 
Keep on writing |
Thanks! The girl actually won't die...she can't run fast enough, and both the guys are in love with her, so it really is just a battle between them or letting all the human population die...