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02-18-2008, 05:20 AM
Here's a fun activity wherein you make a story with everyone in japanese and English.
Use your imagination and create the story by adding an idea,one after another.This is a free flow story making in which everybody parpitipate. Since understanding all what other students says is essential to continue the game, it was a good way for me to improve my English skill.  To avoid a trouble, we shouldn't make a correction on any mistakes, unless the participants want, but me. I'll be happy to meet helpfull corrections on my mistakes in English.  First it's my turn. I was walking alone in the forest and met a beautiful girl. Then.... watashiga mori no naka wo hitoride aruiteiruto kireina onnanoko ni deatta. sonotoki... わたしが森の中を一人で歩いていると、きれいな女の子 に出会った。その時・・・ It's your turn. Follow me,thank you! 
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02-18-2008, 08:55 AM
"What a beautiful girl, absolutely my type, "I thought "I want to go out with her, but first, we must be friend..." , Then.....
綺麗な女の子、確かに俺のタイプだったと思った。付 き合いたいな、でも、先ず、友たちにならなぎゃいかん と思った。。。そして。。。
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02-18-2008, 10:17 AM
話しかけようとしたが、ためらった。ここは森の中だし 、今は夜だ。変態と間違われるかもしれない。だから...
hanashikakeyoutoshitaga tameratta.kokoha morinonaka dashi imaha yoruda. hentaito machigawarerukamoshirenai.dakara... I was about to say to her "hello", but I hesitated to do it, this is in a forest and it's night now. She might mistake me for a pervert. So... Thank you for the first participation, Dragon! 
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02-18-2008, 11:52 PM
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For the time being, I think I will just go home. When I was about to leave, I heard a voice calling for help. Turned around, I began to search for the source o f the sound.... I think this thread is kinda hard for the people. Please correct me, if I got anything wrong, XD
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ok -
02-19-2008, 03:03 AM
綺麗な女の子、俺の理想のタイプだor 俺の好みにぴったりだと思った。付 き合いたいな、でも、先ず、友だちにならなきゃいかん と思った。。。そして。。。
とりあえず、家へ行こうか。帰ることに決めたその時 or 決めた時、誰か助けてって声が聞こえた。振り返り、声の主(nushi)or 声のした所を捜したor捜し始めた。。。。 Ｒｅｄ means absolutely mistakes. Green means understandable but odd, If you prefer natural japanese,you should change the words. Your japanese is not only good but also vivid. I even guess that you are trying to be a translater. If you find mistakes in my english, please correct them It's my turn. すぐに彼女を発見できた。彼女も僕に気がついて、僕の 方に走り寄ってきた。彼女の後ろには、蛇がいた。僕は ・・・ Ｉmmediately, I could find her. She also noticed me and running close to me. There is a snake behind her. I... I have just been aware of the difficulty of this thread.  It will be an unpopular thread. hahaha. This game should be oral.  Someone,please make ending.
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02-19-2008, 06:12 PM
一瞬、自分で逃げて、彼女はどうでもいいと思った。 蛇が恐い、でも彼女は危険に陥っているんだ。オレが男 だ、男はもっと強くならなきゃいかん。［心配ない、君 はオレが護る！］この言葉を言っちゃって、勇気も増え た。すぐに、手のサイズの石を取り、蛇を殺した。後、 汗がいっぱい、これは緊張や恐れの汗。その時、彼女も いなかった。。［畜生！感謝するって言えよ。。。君を 助けたのに。。。］
Thank you for correcting my mistakes , that really helps a lot XD And, my Japanese is not good, I've only been learning casually for around 6 month. I am not really learning with any textbook, just learn by playing games and anime...haha
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02-20-2008, 12:01 AM
一瞬、自分だけ逃げて、彼女はどうでもいいと思った。蛇が恐い、でも 彼女に危険が迫っているんだ。オレは男だ、男はもっと強くならなきゃいかん。［心配ない、 君はオレが護る！］この言葉を言っちゃって、勇気も増 えた。すぐに、手のひらサイズの石を取り、蛇を殺した。その後or後で、汗がいっぱい出た。これは緊張や恐れの汗。その時、彼女もいなかった。。 ［畜生！感謝するって言えよ。。。君を助けたのに。。 。］
Thank you for the ending. hahaha And, your Japanese is certainly less formal but in fact good at emotional expressions, I was suprised to hear that you've only been learning casually for around 6 month. Good luck!
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02-20-2008, 03:30 AM
Thank you for correcting my mistake, you have no idea how much that would help~ Arigato!
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