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XrachelleX 03-28-2008 01:54 PM

hi hi
 
i like all of you peoples poems. heres one that i just wrote......(sucks though)

I HAVE FALLEN

I have fallen,
Into a place of complete darkness,
I cant find an outing.
I begging to remember you less and less.
Those wings that were on my back,
Have finally faded,
Turning the dark color of black.
The very same happened to my crown,
Its broken and it lay,
Forgotten on the ground.
I have always tried to save,
Those who really need me,
But it turns out I could not save myself,
I have fallen,
Into the darkest,
Of places.
Don’t try to save me.

SamuraiAlchemistNinja 03-28-2008 06:21 PM

Nice work, both of you ^_^
I really liked your last one, Sphinx01
:vsign:

Hyakushi 03-29-2008 03:36 AM

:eek: wow nice Sphinx01 now I am speachless.

Sphinx01 04-08-2008 07:10 PM

..............
 
Ever Changing Eyes

Confused and ensnared by the allure of her gaze/

My thoughts ellipse a path around the seraphic beaty of

her silhouette as we depart our seperate ways/

First green as emerald stars, lighting the center

of heavens doorsteps/ Next hazel, seductively prying

open the core of my masculince/ I’ve realized to late

that now here I lie melted in ecstacy/ Exposed to a myriad

of emotions contained in her eyes/



By Sphinx

04-0608

Sphinx01 04-23-2008 06:29 PM

Yo here is what looks like it will be only a piece to a song I'm currently writing entitled weight of the world..check out and hope u will enjoy the finished project comming soon!!!!


Dealing with pain from the wounds inflicted
by my attackers/ Cope with strain rested on
the back of Atlas/ Aint nothin left in me/ Can't even
stand up/ Layin in somethin out of this world/
Reachin my hads up/


:cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool::cool: :cool:

superheel 04-24-2008 07:44 PM

Its hard to leave everything behind
But its a thing that i must do
Whether i like it or not
I just have to leave but not to say goodbye
Please do not give up, just give me sometime and ill be back
You should know how much i miss you
Its not easy to think that you are there crying and grieving
I pray to God that he make you strong
Because we still need time to get along
Wait for me so we can be the same as before
I LOVE YOU and I MISS YOU that is waht you should know.

PS: Dedicated for my friends and family in the Philippines, specially my MOM. Miss you so MUCH!

Sphinx01 04-25-2008 12:51 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by superheel (Post 471654)
Its hard to leave everything behind
But its a thing that i must do
Whether i like it or not
I just have to leave but not to say goodbye
Please do not give up, just give me sometime and ill be back
You should know how much i miss you
Its not easy to think that you are there crying and grieving
I pray to God that he make you strong
Because we still need time to get along
Wait for me so we can be the same as before
I LOVE YOU and I MISS YOU that is waht you should know.

PS: Dedicated for my friends and family in the Philippines, specially my MOM. Miss you so MUCH!


POWERFUL!!!!!!

Sphinx01 04-28-2008 06:15 PM

..................
 
Meeting at the Bridge:


From one to the next they appeared
the same/ To the eyes of men/
But the traveler sees with blind sight
And so each is recognized for it’s
Own beauties and pleasures/ Each
Presenting its own chance for freedom/

At last he approaches/ The mystery of a world
Enchanted by its own allure/ Seeing in itself
A dark serenity/…And there she stood- Beckoning
Him without words or gestures…not even a gaze to
Acknowledge his presence/ He spoke…she returned
His words with small conversation/ He bowed- and
Thus she allowed him to enter her world…if only for a short time/

From one to the next they appeared
the same/ To the eyes of men/
All the same but this/ This offered beauty…this
One offered adventure/ This offered him a glimpse
Of the Goddess in her world/ However brief his stay-
The traveler would call this world home/ Though he sought other
World…to this he returned..always

Thunda 04-28-2008 06:20 PM

hey brother, how many instrumentals you think we will have on that mixtape, and have you thought of somethin already?

Sphinx01 04-28-2008 07:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Thunda (Post 475564)
hey brother, how many instrumentals you think we will have on that mixtape, and have you thought of somethin already?

Think u can pull off ten..*including the one u just sent me*?....And I have a few ideas or concepts for the material of the mixtape bro;)

Thunda 04-29-2008 05:48 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sphinx01 (Post 475727)
Think u can pull off ten..*including the one u just sent me*?....And I have a few ideas or concepts for the material of the mixtape bro;)

yeah

I made other ones too like 3 today but I gotta share with Triumfantz you know
and I want an own EP too so

but I will make others plenty of others

good 10 is a good number

aight

Sphinx01 07-25-2008 01:08 PM

BAck at JF
 
Home Again

Seduced by the devil I retreated under
his wings/ Polluting my soul with daily lessons
learned from lucifer's kings/ Allowing my humanity
slip I became Possessed-his obsession/ Merely one of
his things/ I'd been decived into believing
I was the child of his dreams/ But I've returned...and that
was then...
HOW DISTANT IT SEEMS

:D :D :vsign:

VampireGirl1314 02-20-2009 09:32 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Sphinx01 (Post 547179)
Home Again

Seduced by the devil I retreated under
his wings/ Polluting my soul with daily lessons
learned from lucifer's kings/ Allowing my humanity
slip I became Possessed-his obsession/ Merely one of
his things/ I'd been decived into believing
I was the child of his dreams/ But I've returned...and that
was then...
HOW DISTANT IT SEEMS

:D :D :vsign:

your poetry is very good, i hope to be a poet one day as well.
good luck on your book, i hope everything goes swell.


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