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A Poets Collage of life...
Greetings friends...Sphinx here, as of last night I decided to post my poetry publicly for everyone to reed and enjoy, or even to criticize...so here goes:cool:
Note everything is copywritten: A Child or a King I here that gods and kings cry alone…displaying no emotions atop their thrones, I here that kings shed tears only in the comfort of darkness, showing no weakness to the world, how misguided we are, believing it’s best to seem heartless/ I here that kings keeps their emotions contained, Unable to publicly show pain/ we leave no trace of our tears/ instead we cry in our chambers in silence, yet in unison with our peers/ So the stars sing of our broken hearts, they’ve done so for years/ They say kings know no regret, how foolish they are/ Or is it the king that is foolish…dwelling in splendor with a hardened heart/ They said that kings believe that it’s best to forget what they say/ I was a king once/ But then u lead me astray/ Now I’m simply a man looking ever forward, afraid of his past/ Seeking twilight, then the dawn so that I can know yesterday has surely passed/ I’m merely a man now trapped in the shell of a child without a childhood/ forced to hate everyone in the area in which I stood/ Perhaps I was never a king, atop a throne/ Merely a delusional child holding tightly the devils hand, yet truly alone, but then u came along, and slowly I stood, slowly I opened up, first my mind, my heart, and now you’ve even taken my soul/ Even if this freedom is only temporary I’m still yours to hold no longer the devils to control…But in truth I wonder what do you see in me, a child in need of love, or a king whose heart is steadily growing cold…or perhaps I’m a demon seed, intertwined, and created by both By: Sphinx 12-22-07 |
That haves quite a quality.:vsign:
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thanks alot...I appreciate it smiles
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I'll probably post another poem this eveing:cool: |
That was so sweet Sphix I could cry!
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...Thanks Natsume...
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No prob Sphinx this poem deserves no less. :D
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That was the best poem Ive ever read, it wasn't to mushy and was strait forward. It held threads to reality, great job keep it up I want to read more of what you write :vsign: :D
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Thansk guys I'll post one this evening
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That is really good!
I notice that a lot of people post poems on here why not just make a poetry thread where people can post their own poetry as many times as they want. I know there is a dark poetry thread put someone can make where you can post all kinds of poetry. Its just a suggestion no one has to do it. |
not a bad idea
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Thanks guys I'm glad u liked it...but here I have another poem for u that I hope u'll like as well entitled...
Even in Death In the end it was my fault, ultimately my price to pay, but instead u paid for me, now u rest in ur grave, all the work u put into me, all te time u spent, worthless, like me now... Why does the fallen live, why do the righteous pay the ultimate price, Why does fate demand of the innocent their life, why do the givers have everything ripped from their arms, why does their blood spill instead of ours, why are the sinners forced to live with this Unbearable shit, is this punishment, God's sick way of forcing me to repent...well it worked, but still u lay cold in heavens arms...while my road is another, one of damnation and eternal internal scars, but even in death nothing can devide our hearts By:Sphinx I was inspired to write this after wathing Samurai x Trust and Betrayl:cool: |
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long as u like it I'm cool man
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Well these two poems r it for today
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Wow that's rly cool I've actually seen that movie and it does actually capture the feeling.
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thanks that's what I was going for...I'm honord that u have enjoyed it.
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The Princess The Princess sat in the Sun one day Playing, Enjoying, and Basking away And a man on the roof called out with a Smile "Take this you Hag!" And Dropped a bag on the Princess Filled with Blood and Bile The Bag Burst over her head! Andd filled with dread the princess said "Oh I must look like I'm Dead" She ran in a cave So not to be seen and in it she stayed When it saw she was upset the sun went away It would not shine, on such a horrible day. It got cold and lonely on that long night And the Warrior said "Where is the Princess?" And the Warrior found her Secluded in the Recess And could not caox her out no matter what he tried So they called to the Poet Who came up with a plan. "We shall get her out yet, He said with ardur They set up a mirror and all clapped their hands and sang "look Princess, One more beautiful than thee!" And she came out to see the beauty and saw her reflection! And the sun came out happy to see that there where none more beautiful than she She said to the poet "This mirror is yours, In it my soul shall thrive and you and your line Shall forever be alive" and she said to her maids "I need to go home and I pray you have the soap that makes that nice foam!" My litle sister wrote that. She gave me permission to use it:D |
awesome..I c great talent!!!
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Another one
No Longer Man In truth the stars mock me, in my heart fate is the demonic reaper and I am his slave, In regret, blood and misery my path has been paved, Constellations sing of my torment/ My soul lies dormant/Evil now the victor of my internal clash/ And farewell to emotions my heart has beat it's last/ I won't blame her for this though, the fault was not hers For how was she to know that all hope which rests in my eyes is cursed/ How could she have known/ that I am damned and destined to rest in hell as my home/ Until the end of eternity's sleep/ When I shall reign as king upon purgatory's forgotten throne/ Until the last in Armageddon has fallen and all r sent to their respective homes, I alone shall stand and watch on...As the creature of stone, no longer a man, never a king...I know now that all traces of what I once loved was merely a dream/ A collage of lies painted on the bosom of a once conscious being BY: Sphinx 12-23-07 Wrote this one this morning after a convo I had last night/ or early htis morning rather wis my cousin about women and love...And bad break ups:cool: |
Be sure 2 look for another one from me soon ok
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All right here's mine
An ocaean sepeates you and me.And as I look to the sea, all I find is ache, becouse all I hear is your heartbreak, It was cruel, what fate delt, to dream of your arms, I've never felt, But take peace in this, that my spirt will alwas exist, in your heart, and in your mind, And if you look, deep inside, its alwas gentleness you''ll find. My first poem since middle school:D |
@ Natsume- Hey that's pretty cool!! Did you just write that off the top of u'r head???:eek: I've always had tons of them but never wrote any down:o
Maybe I'll try it o_O |
Great poems!
How about this be the thread where anyone can write their own poetry. If you don't mind Sphinx01. |
sure why the hell not
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Serenade
Hip-Hopers pattern I serenaded a princess and wrote graffitti for a queen/ Ink dipped in tears & bullet shells-messengers of death for the king-/ Meditated with Jehovah so I draw portraits of gods-/ Rap songs for the Devil and poetic symphonies for stars-/ Studied life from a wolf pack and wrote their names in Hieroglyphics-/ Pain is Hip-hop/ Hip-Hop is the essence in my system-so it's clear that through Hip-Hop pain is all I'm capable of depicting-/ By: Sphinx 12-24-07 I wrote this about my relationship and history with hip-hop...hope u all enjoy:cool: ;) |
Another Hit Sphinx, I think you can really go somewhere with this kind of thing. :D
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How could I do anything less for u guys but give it my all *smiles*
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Merry Christmas "Hoteisho"-"Pere Noel" Commercial Christmas Suppose it's that time of year where weapons r put away Lives r allowed to go on/ So we exist for another day/ Smiles on childish faces/ Songs in merry hearts/ While the fallen themselves smile/ Dreaming of hope for a new start/ Visions of Santa Clause flash across TV screens/ Only the sick and pain infested truly remeber what the season means/ While the lovers sing of Rudolph the lonly sing of love/ While the rich sing of presents and chestnuts the poor sing of giving / When familys r safe in their beds/ The homeless r out in the cold, still singing Pere Noel, Pere Noel/ Kris Kringle can't deliver us from hell Only the joy inside of our hearts, Only the truth will allow the Flame of Change to spark...So I'll exclaim to the world before the night slips out of Sight, Merry Christmas 2 all, And may we illuminate the world with our souls light/ By Sphinx Merry Christmas JF luv all of U guys;) :D :D |
I feel slightly proud of me...ok pride has vanished
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A Poet's Collage of life
Sphinx that was a tight poem :cool:
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Which one?
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wow your poems are awesome
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Awwwww thanks sis:cool: |
your welcome^_^ you should put all of your poems together and make a book or something
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that's really good.. i wish to see ur next:vsign:
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I'll be putting them out as they come and thanks for the support guys
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Hehehehehehehehe! looks like I'm not your only fan Sphinx:D
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Yeah but ur my favorite
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