Help with my manga!!!!
 

I'm making my own manga, and just out of curiosity would like to know what ppl would want to read.

Actually i'm not the one whose drawing the people my friend is the one drawing it.I'm basically the one who plots the story and thinks of the setting and the names of the characters etc.

Can you give more info? Do you have any ideas yet for the story plot?

Once you give us an idea of what it is, we can give opinion and critique and so on.

I'm making manga, in progress. I still learn too.

Well in manga, the strenght is not only the draw but also the story. Ganbatte ne! You also have to consider the jump from one box to another like the transition of scenes. It's important for your story allure.

Ummm I'm still in the progress of doing that, i should have it by the end of tomorrow b/c my friend is helping me wit it.

I would like to read it, when you post it :D

I'm also putting together a manga, which is still in its unfinished form.

:ywave:

Would love to have you read!! May i read urs when it's finished?:mtongue:

sure, whenever i can finish it. all i need is one night, no distractions, and i should be done.;)

how far are you guys into yours? :ywave:

Actually we just started workin on it, we almost finished with the plot we should have the plot finished by the end of today, so i'll let you guys read the plot when i have it.:vsign:

Update: We've had a little set back, i haven't talked to my friend today so i won't have the plot like i expected. I probably won't have it until tomorrow. sorry guys

it's all good. take your time, brah :D

How is ur manga goin Thumper?

lol funny that you ask. For a week now, i haven't really been able to concentrate on it cuz of my sister's kids. right now, she took them for a cruise, and it's nice and quiet in the house. however, i'm too lazy to do anything 'cept surf lol.

i would say it's 65... 70% complete. most of the pages are inked. just need to screentone them and add words. :p

wow ur really far! How long have u been workin on it?

about a week. i really need to get back to it, cuz it's gathering dust right about now. lol.

anyway, back to the subject of the topic, did you get the plot yet? :D

does your buddy have any sketches relating to your project? if so, both of youse won't mind sharing with us? :p

best of luck to your manga. ;)

:vsign:

Umm i'm still waiting for my friend to contact me!! I'm not sure wats taking so long? I'm sorry for the delay!! I do and don't have sketches of my character. I have sketches but there not with me at the moment. I won't mind showing u guys, i'm just sorry that it's taking so long

Update: I won't have the plot until monday, since my friend decided not to work on it, sry Thumper. I can pm you as soon as i have it!!!

Tis is the plot that i've come up with so far pls take time and review it for me, thnx

Aya escaping her life in effort to find her parents.

There was a king who was in need of a princess to take over for his queen. He had a son, but he was though unfit for the honer of being called king. So the king went to an orphanarium to find a daughter. His pick was Aya Tsukiko, an orphan whos parents whereabouts were unknown. Her only possession was a picture of her parents. As years past and she grew, she learned to swordfight, and that soon became her second priority. Her first priority was trying to find her parents. This made her different from the other feminins, as she would rather train then try to look better for the guys. As a sideeffect to her training, she knew all the guards, as they were the only ones that liked training. She hung out with them alot, so much that she became to like the lifestyle of a fighter then a princess. She liked the times when she wasnt forced to wear, the stupid girly outfits. Despite this, she still uses ediquiet and calls everyone sir or miss. She slowly started hating the life
she lived. Every night she snuck out to the woods, hopeing she would be able to escape her "prison" she called it. Unfortunatly she got caught every night despite her best efforts. However, one night was different, she saw a figure as she was running from the guards. She screams at the top of her lungs right as the guards catch her. The figure only ooks towards her direction, otherwise motionless, screams one last time as the guards pull her away. Hoping that the figure might come to her rescue. But alas, he remained motionless.

that is very good! i can picture it happening in my head as i read this bit. but i think she should try one more time when something horrible has happened to the kingdom. she trys to help but instead she escapes,becuase someone took her. but knocked her out and left her alone in a snowy village due to some guy.

i like fantasy/comedy
like negima

Thnx alot, If you have any other ideas feel free to post them on my website as well as here. Swords of the Princess - Home

ill make sure to do that! i see you posted mine up there already!^_^

its an automatic poster i have a website from the same company

lol yep, thnx for that idea, We're tryin to see if we can put it in the story!:ywave:

coolio! wat part of texas do you live in? and how many volumes do you think your manga is going to be? or is it to early to tell?

Short tip.
 

First . in a story plot or whateva you call it. you need a intro. ...then a problem..then lastly a solution for a manga.. while in that problem. just add more problems that conflict with the problem.., lol sorry if i am confusing you.

It's still a little early to tell yet, but hopefully if the first volume goes well, we hope to make more.

Aya escaping her life in effort to find her parents.
There was a king who was in need of a princess to take over for his queen. He had a son, but he was though unfit for the honer of being called king. So the king went to an orphanarium to find a daughter. His pick was Aya Tsukiko, an orphan whos parents whereabouts were unknown. Her only possession was a picture of her parents. As years past and she grew, she learned to swordfight, and that soon became her second priority. Her first priority was trying to find her parents. This made her different from the other feminins, as she would rather train then try to look better for the guys. As a sideeffect to her training, she knew all the guards, as they were the only ones that liked training. She hung out with them alot, so much that she became to like the lifestyle of a fighter then a princess. She liked the times when she wasnt forced to wear, the stupid girly outfits. Despite this, she still uses ediquiet and calls everyone sir or miss. She slowly started hating the life she lived. Every night she snuck out to the woods, hopeing she would be able to escape her "prison" she called it. Unfortunatly she got caught every night despite her best efforts. However, one night was different, she saw a figure as she was running from the guards. She screams at the top of her lungs right as the guards catch her. The figure only ooks towards her direction, otherwise motionless, screams one last time as the guards pull her away. Hoping that the figure might come to her rescue. But alas, he remained motionless. This doesnt mean he was unaware of what was going on.
For while he may look motionless from a distance, he was ordering his little pet to follow her. He stayed still in oder to remain unsuspicious through the guards' eye. As the guards pulled a miserable Aya back to her home, the figure's little pet crawled at a pace that kept the guards in sight. The critter followed the guards and soon approached the castle. From this point, he kept his eye on the girl as she got forced inside. Aya, having been through this routine countless times, headed up to her room with a gloomy face. The critter scaled the walls, easily keeping up without breaking a sweat. Aya went into her room, slammed the door, and ploped on her bed. The critter relentlessly followed as he squeezed under the door and jumped on Aya's bed without making a sound. He sat quietly on the bed and listened to Ayas mumbling about how she
wanted to be free. She got up and surveyed the room, her walls,her floor, and then... her bed. She spotted the critter staring at her. Aya puts her arm out, unafraid. The critter took her invitation, and craweled up her arm. Aya lightly pet him, stating that he was a friendly little spider.

We were thinking that if we split this whole thing up into parts that we could make the first volume of our manga out of it! Do you think it would be a good first volume?

i think it is lacking some mystery...most poeple want to be pulled in. i think there should be some type of connection between the girl and the mstery dude. and when i say "connection" i mean when they meet face to face some sort of light flashes around, the wind picks up...you know, wierd occurances...things like that.
(who's "we"????)

oh sry, i'm working in a team of 3!! I am the kinda boss/recuriter guy~ My friend(the one that made the website) is my storyboard artist, And my other friend Rin-chan(is my Artist)

oh really? how does Rin-chan draw? can you take any pictures of her drawings and post them up here? i would ask her myself, but i dont know how to get to her profile.....(sweatdrop)....eh-heh....and that storyboard artist of yours is really improving that website. tell him please!

Yep, lol, Rin-chan draws really good, i think. We're actually in the process of doing that she actually drawing Aya for me right now!idk when she'll be done, she's really lazy,lol.When she's finished we are gonna post them on our website and i'll post them here. Rin chan doesn't have a profile on her but i can give you the website she just made! Paradisekiss.weebly.com there you go. if you have anymore suggestions pls . let anyof us know.

yep sure no problemo!

Thnx U!!! i read ur profile and it said u were a writer and a poet!! That's really cool. Wat kinda stuff do u write?:ywave:

lots of things, horror, comedy(not much), romance(depends on how i feel at the moment), alot of dark things....and its wierd cuzz im not a dark person at all. but my peoms(check POETS CORNER to find out) are all REALLY REALLY REALLY dark....i have no clue why though....AND ADVENTURE!!! I LOVE WRITING ABOUT ADVENTURE!!!!

That's cool, umm Not sure how to get to poets corner though, sry. Have u ever thought about making a manga?

yeah. and ive actually got the first chapter done. but i dont hink its gonna happen.

Could i read it? It can't be that bad! ^_^

its not that its bad. its just i havent put it into book format and i dont think im going to be finishing it any time soon. and it dont know how to work the computer to actually make it so you can read it. but i can tell your the title and the story plot if ya want....

Yea, that would be nice!! ^_^:ywave:

erm...k....
 

ok. then. well, uh...its about a girl who has just arrived at a new place/school/house. 1st day of school, she meets the school bad-boy. the vice-president, and the perverted principle. she eventually starts to live with them because her whole family died. (note: the guys she meets are NOT related.but they do live together) she starts to explore the house and find out that they are all shinigami, who were told to reap the souls of the living.(in my terms: meaning: KILL EVERYONE ONE IN THE WAY) and she also finds out that her mom survived and she is the key to earths survival.

BUT THE MAIN QUESTION REMAINS!!!!

(what will happen if she falls in love with one of they high-school boys?)

its called:

FORGOTTEN LOSS

That's really Good, Awesome^_^ Did u come up wit that on ur own? (sry if i'm coming of rude)