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SweetSuicide 05-02-2009 05:40 AM


It's been almost two years since I wrote something so please forgive me if it's bad. :vsign:


I look to the sky and I wonder why.
Why you left without a goodbye.
You took my heart and you took my life.
How oh how did we let this die?
You ment the world maybe a little more.
But I was nothing to you nothing at all.
And now I sit here and wonder why.
Why you left without a goodbye.

nanas 05-02-2009 05:44 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SweetSuicide (Post 708544)

It's been almost two years since I wrote something so please forgive me if it's bad. :vsign:


I look to the sky and I wonder why.
Why you left without a goodbye.
You took my heart and you took my life.
How oh how did we let this die?
You ment the world maybe a little more.
But I was nothing to you nothing at all.
And now I sit here and wonder why.
Why you left without a goodbye.

Well you havent skipped a beat!

SweetSuicide 05-02-2009 05:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nanas (Post 708545)
Well you havent skipped a beat!

Thank you! It feels good to come back "home" after a long time being away and to know I still got it. XD

VampireGirl1314 05-02-2009 05:59 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SweetSuicide (Post 708544)

It's been almost two years since I wrote something so please forgive me if it's bad. :vsign:


I look to the sky and I wonder why.
Why you left without a goodbye.
You took my heart and you took my life.
How oh how did we let this die?
You ment the world maybe a little more.
But I was nothing to you nothing at all.
And now I sit here and wonder why.
Why you left without a goodbye.

i wish i could write poetry like this
it makes me sick knowing that mine is bad.TT~TT

VampireGirl1314 05-02-2009 07:54 AM

My friend Pedro's first english poem.xD
 
my entire life belongs to you
my entire heart sing a song proud to be your property
im so gladd to belong to you...
my eyes only can see you in the distance, in the nearest point
my ears only can hear your voice aproaching in the winter wind
i..m a sorvivor of love...
the most hard and bloody war... doesn..t respect anyone
doesn..t pity whit anybody... is only fear and love
peace and war...

death and life..

all is mixed in our hearts...
and i ask you... this is the way??






ANOTHER!!!



remember when we used to look the sunsets far away
and how you say "this is never over"
i believed you every word and i guess you did too
and now you say hey let´s think this over...
you take my hand and pull me next to you so close to you
i have a feeling you dont have the words
i found one for you kiss your cheek say bye and walk away
dont look back cause im crying











and now mine!!!!


and now mine!!!!



couldn't sleep
im still thinking of you
i wish you could see me in your dreams
think of me one last time
never say goodbye
i want you always bye my side
i miss you and all the things you do
why did you say that i can never speak to you
i want to be with you so badly
i cry to much everyday
wishing this terrible pain would go away
wish you see my face
and all this pain that still remains this day
you couldn't understand my reasons
couldn't see my dreams all my fantasies
cant you see
i only think of you
dream of you
want to be with you
just cant sleep knowing i wont be a part of you
in the end i guess you couldn't even be my friend.

VampireGirl1314 05-02-2009 11:42 PM

he told me how romantic it would be to kiss in the rain
and it started to rain
and i asked if he would give me one last kiss
and he did
but it turned out
it wasnt the last
but its a memory
that i will always see in the past.

KaZaSaGiSaN 05-02-2009 11:58 PM

Cocoon
 
Stuck in this world, growing into conformity
Even when I spread my wings I know I won't be free
Somehow I'll be set apart by the way I feel and act
Society becomes something gaudy, with no taste or tact
Just add a little poison, stain me with true blood
I'll grow diversely and swim against the flood
All the same expressions, hats, clothes, and shoes
They share the same destiny without a will to choose
I follow a self-created path instead of one laid out
I'm the shining, glowing light, variety all about
See my smile and turn to look upon me
All those who are jealous, who want to be free
Like elephants tied at the stake, they know not how to change
"There's no time to think about that in this day and age"
Surrounded by an ever-growing mass of mindless drones
I'll be sure to leave this world happy, different, and alone
Do not think that is such a harsh way to go
Just be yourself, crazy, unique, the you that you should know
If there are others out there such as me
Then we can die together, content and free

~Stephanie Valentine AKA me

japangirl32503 05-03-2009 12:33 AM

darkness falls behind her eyes
she closes them to keep away the light
light breaks thought beneath her feet
a flowing river of dancing lights
never ending and bottomless
don't look at the lights..

bathed in the cloak of lights
she sinks deeper into the river
she opens her eyes
and cries to the night
to put out the lights....

VampireGirl1314 05-03-2009 07:01 AM

i feel my life fading away
the skies turning to gray
making me feel pain
when i see your face
your smile is so blinding
makes me feel okay
when you walk away
my day returns to gray
why cant i just say
how much i miss you
when i know
your kisses
wont feel the same
because your love
is no longer for me
for somebody else
who can make you feel happy
i wish you could have stayed
very, very close to me
and always tell me
just how much you want me
to stay with you
is the best thing i could do
just looking at you
i feel lost in your world
my world is always of you
my dreams never will come true again
because now you are only my friend
and probably wont love me ever again.

SaintKat 05-03-2009 07:38 PM

japangirl32503 that is absolutely beautiful.
:ywave:

Edit:

I've fallen from grace
Broken wings and faded dreams
Such desperation


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