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ChiAmaterasuNeko 04-02-2009 01:51 AM

[A Sonnet Concerning Death]

When eyes do close and see the light no more
With one last breath to draw the air of life
A final heartbeat leading through Death's door
To think, “What next?” fills my whole self with strife.
Could everlasting darkness be the end?
Eternal nothingness could be my fate?
My life so meaningless in vain I spend?
Cruel death so empty on me will not wait.
Yet through the void I see a hopeful light
Once the grave is dug and the body mourned
Life after bitter death; could this be right?
I live again, into forgiveness born!
By the blood of Christ I'm saved from my sin
And immortality in Heav'n I win.

By: Me


nobora 04-02-2009 01:56 AM

Im here
Im there
Im everywhere
but you dont see me

I try me best
I Try my hardest
But you dont notice

ChiAmaterasuNeko 04-02-2009 01:57 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nobora (Post 692333)
Im here
Im there
Im everywhere
but you dont see me

I try me best
I Try my hardest
But you dont notice


That's how I feel about 100% of the time.

nobora 04-02-2009 01:58 AM

@ChiAmaterasuNeko

LOL me too

VampireGirl1314 04-02-2009 02:31 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by nobora (Post 692333)
Im here
Im there
Im everywhere
but you dont see me

I try me best
I Try my hardest
But you dont notice

i love this........





I havent seen you in two days
Are you hiding from me
I thought you loved me
I mean you told me just the other day
Should i wait here for you
Or should i forget you ever knew me
And stay away?

nobora 04-02-2009 02:36 AM

@Vampiregirl .
thank you . I like yours too

Why do you torture me so
When you know that it hurts me
Why dont you care
When you know i care
Why do you hate me so
When I havent done anything wrong
Why do you stay with me
After all those things you did to me?

VampireGirl1314 04-02-2009 11:03 AM

@nobora: that poem is so true.T_T i think you are like the other me that has the same things happening.T_T

We hug
We kiss
We hold hands
But you love me to roughly
You handle me like as if i was a boy
I dont like playing these games
They hurt me
Way more then they hurt you
But you know i love you
And still
You act like i haven't told you
Like these three years have been nothing
yet they've meant everything for me and you
Why do you act like such a little kid?

MoshixMoshi 04-02-2009 01:22 PM

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Ignore this i didnt know how to delete it...sorry

VampireGirl1314 04-02-2009 01:44 PM

hahaha lol this is like so funny its better then a poem.>^_^<:D :vsign:
its cool just click on edit and delete it.:D :vsign:

VampireGirl1314 04-03-2009 10:20 AM

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Kyo makes me feel the same way as this pic.:(

I feel trapped in a swimming pool of water,
the pool has a lid i cannot escape,
just as i cannot escape this fate im in right now.
what happens if its too late when you get to me?


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