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sakari09 02-09-2009 05:09 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 673874)
your poems keep on getting better.>^_^<
I dont know about mine though.:p

Really? They all have the same ring to me. LOL :rolleyes: maybe I am getting better. I dunno. I enjoy reading ur's Twin.

HaruHotaru 02-09-2009 09:53 PM

I'm so glad he didnt' know
when he gazed at the glowing glass
his hands gripping snacks like treasure
his small, curious hands...

The latest breaking, lulling speech
from the speaker, spouting riddled words
his unlearned ears cannot translate
for now, anyway.

Window suddenly becomes hideous, unfit,
Common keyhole of corrupt, sick,
But like a blessed shield, he blinks
away the nonsense there.

I just switch it off, and walk to him
his blank stare is now a knowing smile
he sais to me his lovely, wordless,
tones of warmth and fearless ignorance.

This is the time, a golden time
this first gift of 'peace of mind' where
he doesn't understand this world
he's come into just yet.


- HaruHotaru

VampireGirl1314 02-10-2009 01:41 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sakari09 (Post 673955)
Really? They all have the same ring to me. LOL :rolleyes: maybe I am getting better. I dunno. I enjoy reading ur's Twin.

lol thanks.>^_^<

nobora 02-10-2009 02:56 AM

What to say..

When you are here..

when your there...

When your Away...

When your gone forever...

HaruHotaru 02-11-2009 07:49 PM

Haiku
 
Lightning of the Spring
Pleads for its legacy in
The summer's thunder.

- HaruHotaru

AnimeNerd 02-11-2009 07:54 PM

HAHA poempower XD

sakari09 02-11-2009 08:50 PM

The same,
Yet different.
We are one in the same.
Much like twins
but not born of the same mother.
Friends forever.

VampireGirl1314 02-12-2009 01:09 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sakari09 (Post 674429)
The same,
Yet different.
We are one in the same.
Much like twins
but not born of the same mother.
Friends forever.

lol.>^_^<
we may not look the same on the outside,
but on the inside we are the same,
it may take years to find your twin,
that is because we are not the same,
and we came from different mothers,
but here we are twins,
we have finally found each other,
and we will be together forever.


I finally picked up that book Masquerade and finished it.>^_^<
it was talking about are kind.
about how us twins could re-unite.>^_^<

AsianAtHeart 02-12-2009 02:19 AM

I gaze into your eyes and feel nothingness
I hear your voice and yet, yearn to be with you
I see you and alas, my heart is frozen

I shall never know my true self without you in my life
My heart shall love no more because of my loss of yearning for you, my one true love
I admire you from afar, yet my voice, nor undying pain reach you

My aching heart, turned to stone, ready to crumble

What have I done to deserve this misery? This torture?
A black rose as my only companion and death as my only wish
My final wish on my death bed to hear your voice, your lips forming the words 'I love you...'

Tell me, please, that you love me
My death will forever be in vain
with my last pain not being leaving this world, but the ultimate heartbreak

I lay motionless in a black dress
my death caused by a loveless, broken heart of ice


Too intense, maybe? :/

VampireGirl1314 02-12-2009 08:16 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by AsianAtHeart (Post 674472)
I gaze into your eyes and feel nothingness
I hear your voice and yet, yearn to be with you
I see you and alas, my heart is frozen

I shall never know my true self without you in my life
My heart shall love no more because of my loss of yearning for you, my one true love
I admire you from afar, yet my voice, nor undying pain reach you

My aching heart, turned to stone, ready to crumble

What have I done to deserve this misery? This torture?
A black rose as my only companion and death as my only wish
My final wish on my death bed to hear your voice, your lips forming the words 'I love you...'

Tell me, please, that you love me
My death will forever be in vain
with my last pain not being leaving this world, but the ultimate heartbreak

I lay motionless in a black dress
my death caused by a loveless, broken heart of ice


Too intense, maybe? :/

Very Nice, well done.>^_^< I give you an A+.:D


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