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sakari09 01-04-2009 10:17 PM

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Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 658329)
Something Special!!!

If you loved someone would you tell them?
if they loved you would you take care of them?
if they wanted to stay with you would they run away from home?
I would but only to see you!
I would tell you how much i loved you!
I would email you everyday just to make sure your okay!
But how can we trust this thing called love?
Do we just let life go on the way you dont want it to go?
I would never let a love like you get away not in my life time.
I would sleep in the cold just to be with you.
I would make sure you were happy.
If i was making you sad would you tell?
I think you would because you have a kind heart!
You are the most special thing ive found in life!
Thats why i will talk to you everyday and make sure you are okay!
But am i special enough for you to do the same for me???

By:VampireGirl1314

liking it chick. Keep up the good work. ^.^

VampireGirl1314 01-04-2009 11:35 PM

lol thanks and that was written out of pure bordom and love that might never be mine but i think it will someday his name is josh he says that he loves me.>^_^< so i wrote it for him and sent it to my friends they love it.XD

sakari09 01-04-2009 11:43 PM

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Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314 (Post 658363)
lol thanks and that was written out of pure bordom and love that might never be mine but i think it will someday his name is josh he says that he loves me.>^_^< so i wrote it for him and sent it to my friends they love it.XD

they say that the fastest way to get to a man's heart is through his stomach. LOL Maybe you should invite him over for dinner?

VampireGirl1314 01-05-2009 12:19 AM

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Originally Posted by sakari09 (Post 658368)
they say that the fastest way to get to a man's heart is through his stomach. LOL Maybe you should invite him over for dinner?

i would but he lives in south carolina and im in mexicali mexico.XC its so sad i only met him online i havent gotten a chance to meet him yet.T_T

LainIwakura 01-05-2009 03:42 AM

Work in progress....

waltz of midnight struck violence upon our dance and it bellows a discordant symphony. "to do or to die" malice spoke softly. Dusk fallen like a blanket of snow; At the gates we beg for repentence. I haven't the hand ov God. Divine purgatory that kissed his own reflection, nothing but perverse attraction. "To do or to die", Malice spoke underneath the moonlight...I have but the beauty ov once what was such golden wings. Human form and it's scarred symmetry. Mechanical arms, never as graceful as my scorched heart. I have but a twisted ventricle flow. You are divine like red pungent wine with a deep hue and brilliant glow. Crystallized structure, contrived to make me feel alive.

sakari09 01-07-2009 07:51 PM

@LainIwakura: nice "work in progress". I've done a similar poem personifying wrath and virtue.

@VampireGirl1314: Sry about ur luck there. I hope you meet him one day!

LainIwakura 01-10-2009 02:31 PM

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Originally Posted by sakari09 (Post 660727)
@LainIwakura: nice "work in progress". I've done a similar poem personifying wrath and virtue.

@VampireGirl1314: Sry about ur luck there. I hope you meet him one day!

Thanks. I'd like to hear yours too =^.^=

sakari09 01-19-2009 08:52 PM

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Originally Posted by LainIwakura (Post 661930)
Thanks. I'd like to hear yours too =^.^=

I can’t remember how long
It has been since I’ve seen the sunset
On the safe shore.
I’ve been below the sea,
Drug under by your hands
And promises for a
Brighter future.
Water blinds my vision
Like an early morning fog.
I hear your voice in my mind
But your face is nowhere near.
These dark depths of my soul,
Are tortured and bruised,
And yet
I long for you.
How long must I wait to be
Pulled to the surface?

VampireGirl1314 01-27-2009 07:21 AM

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Originally Posted by sakari09 (Post 660727)
@LainIwakura: nice "work in progress". I've done a similar poem personifying wrath and virtue.

@VampireGirl1314: Sry about ur luck there. I hope you meet him one day!

yeah i hope so too.
wel anyways i am gonna write a few valantines day poems to put up i just wish i knew how to start them off.>.<

MilliPanda 01-27-2009 07:32 AM

Imagination sets the spirit free
Into distant lands of fantasy
Just close your eyes and you will see
Within your mind there lies the
Key



I saw this poem written on a shopping bag in Greece XD


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